(Untitled)

Oct 18, 2009 16:00

Sugar
by whereupon
Castiel. PG. Spoilers for 5.04. 2,561 words.
He did not fall.
Thanks to paxlux for encouragement and wisdom.

-- )

Leave a comment

Comments 17

thandie October 19 2009, 08:19:41 UTC
Oh this is beautiful! Poor Cas. ♥

Reply

whereupon October 23 2009, 01:08:24 UTC
Thank you very much! ♥

Reply


innie_darling October 19 2009, 15:04:12 UTC
Very effective, and beautifully done.

Reply

whereupon October 23 2009, 02:06:28 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥

Reply


ficwriter1966 October 19 2009, 20:29:45 UTC
Beautifully done. Thank you!

Reply

whereupon October 23 2009, 02:14:10 UTC
Thank you very much for reading, and for the note! ♥

Reply


azdaja_dafema November 11 2009, 21:36:23 UTC
"Not having ever known eternity probably helps."
/gorgeous/ line.

As is this:

His brother wearing the body of Dean's brother, and does this make Dean his brother, too? There are times when he thinks that it might, when he thinks that this might be an epiphany, might reveal something of great and epic import about his Father's children, but these times pass quickly, are lost with the path of chemicals twisting through this human shell, igniting paths, burning others.

And this:
when the silence becomes almost tangible, as though it might seep black from the trees at any moment. The air smells faintly of smoke and sulfur, cinder and soot. Something is burning again. Something is always burning.

And the whole passage about remembrance. And the praying and the sudden disconnect with what Castiel /was/. This is just beautifully written and gorgeously evocative.

Reply

whereupon November 15 2009, 18:45:33 UTC
Oh, what a lovely note. Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this, and I really appreciate your thoughtful words.

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

whereupon August 9 2010, 21:53:33 UTC
So delighted that you liked it! Thank you, very much.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up