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[whereupon]

I've no idea why I've been writing so much as of late, guys, but I imagine it'll slow down at some point soon. In the meantime, apologies for spamming you with stories, eh?

Cradle
by whereupon
Sam/Dean. Season one, R, 3,070 words.
It would hurt that much more when he realized his mistake.
A remix (cover version?) of paxlux's " Riptide."

Comments

[lavinialavender]

Love the last two paragraphs like burning. Incredible remix, the best kind. And you two collaborating - ♥

[whereupon]

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one, that the remix worked! Thank you, very much. ♥

[meesasometimes]

You 'covering' pax...this is like my wet dream.

I mean that in a nonweird way. This was so achingly chilling and lonely even when they are together...agh

[whereupon]

Hee, thank you, very much! I'm so glad that the mood was effective, and that you enjoyed it. :D

[yourkidney]

That was beautiful! It was amazing both as a remix and staying true to the original story, but it was also wonderful as a stand-alone. I loved it!

[whereupon]

I'm delighted that you thought it worked both as a remix and as a standalone. Thank you so much! :D

[girlguidejones]

Loved this. You always have particular turn of phrase that I envy...this time it's "ouroborosed laces". :)

[whereupon]

That's lovely of you to say -- thank you, very much! :D

[whereupon]

I'm so glad that both of those came across here, that they worked for the story. Thank you so much! ♥