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[whereupon]

Homesick
by whereupon
Sam/Dean, pre-series, PG-13, 4,700 words.
For iwrotethissong.
Sam is leaving, and taking with him the long hot summer of their lives.

Comments

[meesasometimes]

I do not have a comment to aptly describe my current hurty bliss.
Please give me stoned Dean all the time or pre-Stanford/Stanford Sam or your amazing phrasing and imagery but God-forbid mix them all together and serve them to me for breakfast cause this is just...uuuhhhh. (the Tower?) now you've just gone too far.

And the final line is just perfection.

[whereupon]

Your comment is awesome -- thank you so much! I'm delighted that this worked for you. :D

[ephemerall]

holy crap, this is absolutely gorgeous.

[whereupon]

Thank you so much!

[whereupon]

I'm so glad that I could write it for you, and even more that you liked it. (And I hope that the nail venture was successful, and that whatever the reason for the feeling of happiness, it persisted. <3, of course!)

[locknkey]

Devastating!

Too many beautiful lines in this, like, maybe he'll shred the letter he keeps beneath his pillow like salvation the way Dean keeps a knife beneath his.

andon a fire escape in the rain; it's the setting for a thousand stupid scenes in a thousand stupid movies, a setting for losers and fuck-ups and people who aren't going anywhere, people without the sense to be somewhere else.

Such a bleak picture of Dean, as if his only real living is his relationship to Sam.

[whereupon]

Thank you so much for your kind words, both here and at crack_impala! I'm so happy that this story worked for you, and I very much appreciate your note. :)

[locknkey]

Congrats! Your fic is recced here at crack_impala