yay, the wait is over ! ;o) I'm happy that you found a way to bring them together... they both have to compromise... I really hope they will be together for the next few months, and will get to really talk, and know each other, so that... NO ! I won't jinx it !!
but man, you like to let us hanging !
PS: did you see Jake's last movies - Enemy and Nightcrawler ? I have to wait for them, to be honest I'm afraid I won't like this dark Jake !
i saw Enemy and i really liked it. NC isn't out till late Oct i don't believe, and i haven't even watched the trailer for it yet. i'm not a big fan of dark jake at all, even tho i did enjoy both Prisoners and Enemy. i would so much love for him to do something light and happy, but that doesn't seem to be in the cards anytime soon.
i'm glad you are still enjoying the story. i'm hoping to get things moving in the right direction starting with the next chapter. :)
thank you. i'm hoping to pick up the pace with my writing, so maybe it won't be so long between updates in the future. thanks for hanging in there with me. :)
I'm so glad to see a chapter. I hoped H&J would hear from each other even if it's just a phone call. Looking forward so much and hoping there will be a "reunion". Love the story.
"somewhere between in-lust and in-love, and very squarely in the throes of in-want" this words are a wonderful summary of the big problem. Thank you so much for bringing anoter chapter os this amazing story. Martha
On one hand I am happy to see an update. On the other hand, I find it a bit frustrating that the story continues to explore the ramblings between desire and confusion of the characters when we all already know plenty that both are in a very confusing situation about each other and it's has been more than two chapters that they neither speak nor interact together. In the story, only a few days have passed, but in time of actual reading, nothing happens since months ago! If the update were weekly or every 10 to 15 days, the pace of the story would be perfect, but reading every two or three months, tracking this fic has become somewhat monotonous.
Of course, this is just a constructive opinion, nothing more. I love all of your stories and if this was published in a book, I would be devouring it from start to finish! It bothers me having to wait so long for the story to move forward or develop precisely because from years now, I´ve always found your writing simply fascinating and totally addictive!!!
i almost didn't post this chapter because of just what you said: it's kinda boring. it's a transitional chapter that i think is necessary to show how both their feelings are changing - as jake continues to struggle he wonders if maybe he walked out on a good thing too fast, and as heath's dealing with this new drama with his grandmother, he's second-guessing most everything in his life. however, i do realize it's not riveting reading, especially with nothing to go with it. i hope that, like you said, if you were reading this story from Ch 1, it would flow and not be a total speed-bump in your interest level.
having said all that, i'm going to try extra hard to get the rest of this story out in a more timely manner and i think -starting with the next chapter - the interaction will start to pick up again. so don't give up yet!! :)
I have no criticisms about the story or the characters development itself,it just makes me feel too impatient having to wait so long between chapters. But as some say ... The good stuff always is worth waiting :D
I'm sorry I turned all "Misery" upon you. Please keep writing and sharing with us always. You know we love you, right? ;)
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I'm happy that you found a way to bring them together... they both have to compromise... I really hope they will be together for the next few months, and will get to really talk, and know each other, so that... NO ! I won't jinx it !!
but man, you like to let us hanging !
PS: did you see Jake's last movies - Enemy and Nightcrawler ? I have to wait for them, to be honest I'm afraid I won't like this dark Jake !
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i'm glad you are still enjoying the story. i'm hoping to get things moving in the right direction starting with the next chapter. :)
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thank you!
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Looking forward so much and hoping there will be a "reunion".
Love the story.
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Of course, this is just a constructive opinion, nothing more. I love all of your stories and if this was published in a book, I would be devouring it from start to finish!
It bothers me having to wait so long for the story to move forward or develop precisely because from years now, I´ve always found your writing simply fascinating and totally addictive!!!
Big hug,
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having said all that, i'm going to try extra hard to get the rest of this story out in a more timely manner and i think -starting with the next chapter - the interaction will start to pick up again. so don't give up yet!! :)
thanks for reading. s :)
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I'm sorry I turned all "Misery" upon you. Please keep writing and sharing with us always. You know we love you, right? ;)
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