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[whisp]

You know when people tell writers to write what they know? There's a freaking good reason for that. Or else you get stuff like this -

"The corticosteroids in his system are holding for now but the liver is too damaged to repair. Preliminary blood tests revealed a ridiculously large amount of alcohol in his system and unfortunately we can't cut

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[in_the_bottle]

That might work if it was about an alien species? I have absolutely no medical training (unless you count psychology, which I don't) and even I can tell that's wrong.

[whisp]

lol. I find stuff like this happens so often, and it drives me absolutely nuts. People just don't realize how much research actually goes into writing.