Say Goodbye With A Smile

Feb 24, 2010 09:45



Title: Say Goodbye With A Smile

Author: whisper_queen

Prompt: “Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you start missing everybody.” - Catcher in the Rye by J.D. Salinger

Characters/Pairing: Sylar/Elle, Noah Bennet, Noah Gray

Rating: PG-13

Warnings (spoilers): minor character death, violence, minor spoilers for volume four

Summary: Loving someone ( Read more... )

syelle, rating: pg-13, noah gray, syelle_challegen, au, noah bennet

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lemomina February 24 2010, 16:11:02 UTC
Wow , that was Beautiful *___*

You made my eyes go teary , it was so moving , i felt so bad for Gabriel :(
and the Happy ending made everything better <33

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dragynflies February 24 2010, 19:00:47 UTC
Oh, this was beautiful!! I really loved all the twists and turns through their life -- I thought it was very true to the characters and to the story. Thanks for sharing :):)

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ellavee February 24 2010, 19:36:53 UTC
loved this!
i really needed a little sappy syelle, everything has been so angtsy lately, so im happy it went the direction it did.
loved that in the end her realized that it wasnt just his son he missed/needed but her too.

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ellavee February 24 2010, 20:29:36 UTC
thats part of why i love your fics so much. because i always know that im gonna get a happy ending. :)

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skysamuelle February 25 2010, 09:17:45 UTC
great fic, zipped full of beautiful turns of phrases... i loved the slow progression of character you had here for Gabriel, and natyrally the ending was the right amount of bittersweet to make my toes to curl up in delight.

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disalae March 3 2010, 00:51:17 UTC
Aw, a nice happy ending for the family :) I liked the way you told the story, really expressing how he felt about what was going on and how much he really cared for his family, even if he couldn't be with the (until the end of course). And so cute that Elle always showed Noah his picture. Great job!

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whisper_queen March 3 2010, 15:15:39 UTC
I think he would always want something like a family and I really couldn't end it sad.

And Elle in the end really did care about him. Her family as well.

Thanks for commenting :)

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