GW500 Challenge 182 Commitment

Jul 23, 2007 23:57


For GW500 Challenge Prompt: 182 Commitment
Title: The Present

Author: Whispurr267
Pairing/Characters: 1x2
Rating: PG
Warnings/Kinks: None except for some sweetness

I held the toolbelt in my hands and looked in confusion to the door. Heero had vanished in that direction shortly after I had unwrapped my present.

I did something wrong, I knew, and thought ( Read more... )

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sharona1x2 July 24 2007, 09:04:55 UTC
That was so sweet! I like how you used the prompt. Mrs D's selling the tools to Heero is a little like passing on the love she shared with her husband. Very nice. ^____^

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whispurr267 July 24 2007, 11:36:18 UTC
Glad you liked it. It was nice how Heero could help a very proud woman and also try in his own way to express himself to Duo. Of course, a lot of the time those two need an interpreter.

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asia_2 July 25 2007, 15:47:20 UTC
I got little tears in my eyes...so sweet (*;o;*) Thank you for sharing! (^_^)

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whispurr267 July 25 2007, 16:36:53 UTC
Sweetness is good a lot of the time. Glad you had a chance to read it.

BTW, I saw someone had made chocolate pasta stuffed with strawberries and cream for desert on one of the websites I visit. Any plans to spoil hubby in the future with something like this.

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orehime July 27 2007, 17:04:51 UTC
Call me inarticulate as Heero, but I love this!

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whispurr267 July 27 2007, 19:31:29 UTC
Thanks for reading. I'm glad if it brought a smile to your face. It was my first try at writing something 'sweet'.

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jukebox_csi August 25 2007, 03:36:41 UTC
This was so endearing :^D It made me sigh with warmth and, also, made me a little nostalgic. I remember how my grandma was such a wonderful cook. The aromas from her kitchen seemed to always draw the neighbors down for a visit and a cup of coffee. Good job!

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whispurr267 August 25 2007, 09:10:39 UTC
Thanks for reading and I'm happy that it brought back to you some pleasant memories of your grandma.

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