Fic: Tangled: Chapter 11

[white_cross_b]

Title: Tangled: Chapter 11
Author: white_cross_b
Type: Fiction
Characters/Pairings: Aya/Chloe, Side B
Rating: NC-17
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[whymzycal]

I'M ON FIRE!!!

How many times have I read this chapter? AND IT JUST GETS HOTTER!!! ARRRRGH!

Love, love, love how they're interacting. Love how they're still a bit rough and snarky on the edges but showing their soft, gooey centers.

Love the dirty talk. Why is it so hot when they say "fuck" to each other?!? GAH!

[white_cross_b]

\o/ fire!

Soft gooey centers! We need an Aya/Chloe candy bar! Seriously though, it's about time they started to work things out. They have so much in common, but they couldn't see past their differences to get to them.

*points and laughs* You liked Chloe's filthy mouth in One, didn't you? I know I did!

[whymzycal]

*hoses self down*

Haha, who wouldn't want a bite of that? Lalala, deedley deedley dee... I like them when they're bitchy to each other, but I like them better and having hot, sweet sex slightly better than hot grudge/cranky sex.

YES! I REVELED IN THE FILTH! I ROLLED IN THE FILTH! filthy = hhhhhot

[white_cross_b]

Thanks so much!

I think that's going to be a frequently used word for Chloe now. ;-)

[elflady_2001]

Fuck!

There, I said it or err...wrote it!

Oooh, Chloe and Aya talkin' dirty! *fans self* Now, Aya's seiyuu has such a sexy, deep voice, I can easily imagine him saying "fuck!". I wonder what Chloe would have sounded like in an anime? How do you imagine he would sound?

[white_cross_b]

Without a doubt, the Chloe in my head is voiced by Mamoru Miyano, who did the voice of Tamaki in Ouran High School Host Club, and Light in Death Note.

Yohji's seiyuu is my absolute fave. I want to have his voice babies. If he said fuck, I would essplode messily all over the place!

A funny thing... apparently Ken had a bit of trouble learning English because Aya and Yuki swore so much! WHAH! :'-D

[elflady_2001]

Oh, he does have a very good voice. I recently picked up the anime Wolf's Rain and he voices Kiba so I'll keep this in mind while watching.

Oh yeah, Yohji's seiyuu is fantastic! I didn't realize he also voices Tsuzuki (Yami no Matsuei), Urahara (Bleach) and Kyuuzo (Samurai 7)! You're right, he should give us all voice babies! LOL.

But I'll never forget the first time I watched Weiss Kreuz and Aya opened his mouth. I was floored at the incredibly deep voice and my toes immediately curled. So did my daughter's. ^_^

[white_cross_b]

Yes! Kiba! I used a pic of him for Chloe's first boyfriend, Sebastian, in my last fic. LUFF! He's currently doing the voice of Setsuna in Gundam 00.

Yohji's seiyuu also does Katou Youji from Haru wo Daiteita (Embracing Love). His voice is inferno hot! He's doing the voice of Lockon in Gundam 00 now.

Have you watched Ouran? Aya's seiyuu does the voice of Haruhi's father, which is absolutely hilarious! He also does the voice of Ukyo in Samurai 7. He's got a hot voice and then he does these completely different characters! I love that. He's got a great range.

[7veilsphaedra]

Poor Chloe. What a peculiar bunch of high school students! They must've been drinking from lead pipes or something. You do a very good job of writing the tension between Aya and Chloe and those little nudges, so tentative, towards warming each other up. It's difficult to write bickering characters and convey that surrendering quality.

[white_cross_b]

Kids can be so mean, can't they? I should have put a pic of young Chloe in there, but I completely forgot! I'm sure I used them in my other fic because they're absolutely squeelicious.

Thanks for that! Love isn't always easy, especially between people like those two who are very set in their ways and have very distinct different personalities. It's painfully obvious that they have a thing for each other though, so things will only get better from there.

[kinukitty]

Holy shit! Mmgrdfgbtff... I wanted to comment on a couple of things, but... Sex scene...

Argle!

[white_cross_b]

HAHA! That's what I love to hear! Thank you!