Fic: Stages 2/12

Mar 11, 2008 22:46

Title: Stages 2/12
Author: white_cross_b
Type: Fiction
Characters: Yohji & Aya
Rating: R
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fic: aya/yohji

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elflady_2001 March 12 2008, 04:03:53 UTC
I love that Aya isn't a simpering, love struck guy (or girl as written by some writers). He's still prickly and well...Aya. :)

Yohji's cool with it, yeah! Next comes lots of curiosity and perhaps before you know it, he's in deep with Aya

Am proud of self. I refrained from turning that into something smutty.

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white_cross_b March 12 2008, 13:20:06 UTC
...he's in deep with Aya.

And you're not a perv? Since when?!

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elflady_2001 March 12 2008, 13:46:06 UTC
...but I didn't write "he's in deep IN Aya". *eye dart*

:P

Ok, I'm a perv. *snickers*

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white_cross_b March 12 2008, 16:40:23 UTC
You didn't have to! I know your mind.

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golden_bastet March 12 2008, 04:10:14 UTC
Well, they started stepping over each others' boundaries, but everything seems to have worked well. (And I don't think Aya will get trashed and show up in Yohji's room tonight, although that bottle may show up again in the future.)

Interesting to see what happens next; right now they could still just be friends...

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white_cross_b March 12 2008, 13:25:24 UTC
Yeah, now that Yohji has stopped being all weirded out, things will be better between them. 10 more stages to go!

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7veilsphaedra March 12 2008, 05:12:37 UTC
Wonderful! I love the slow, tentative way these two are approaching each other. They know they have good reasons to be cautious, so the friendship tactic is a good one!

The response about Yohji's mother was a giggle-snort. They both have a lot of assumptions about each other and they both prickle up quickly too. Takes awhile to hug a hedgehog.

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white_cross_b March 12 2008, 13:28:13 UTC
These two have quite a lot to go through still, but friendship is the best way to start any relationship.

giggle-snorting is the best! SCORE! \o/

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whymzycal March 12 2008, 05:48:19 UTC
WOO! Luff.

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white_cross_b March 12 2008, 13:28:36 UTC
IT LUFFS YOO TOO OMB.

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whymzycal March 12 2008, 13:30:18 UTC
*rolls around in fic like an idiot*

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white_cross_b March 12 2008, 16:42:22 UTC
That's a great compliment, thank you so much!

If they can achieve friendship, hopefully they can achieve more. They have a ways to go though.

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