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Fic: Time

Mar 13, 2008 00:04

Title: Time
Author: white_cross_b
Type: Fiction
Pairing: Yohji & Aya
Rating: NC17
Beta:
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Comments 30

whymzycal March 13 2008, 04:36:48 UTC

I just-

You-

This is so-

*INCOHERENT FLAILING ALL OVER THE PLACE OMG* I love it more every time I read it. THIS IS SO BRILLIANT!!! So, so good. Soooooo good. It has everything in it, absolutely everything.

I should have known that when I said that you couldn't make me, you would make me AND LIKE IT. You and orlisbunny are like the Evil Wondertwins or something.

I hope you realize that you now own my soul.... o.o Also, how could I have frigged up the bunneh's username? AARGH.

artemisia_l March 13 2008, 06:27:36 UTC

Like the other comment says, I am utterly stunned. I couldn't believe where this was going, and when I did, it still made sense. Fantastic! To pull something like this off, and pull it off so well, marks you as a very creative and talented writer. Well done - I really enjoyed it!

white_cross_b March 13 2008, 13:50:48 UTC

Thank you so much for the compliments! I wrote it to make my beta squirm and flail, and it was so much fun! I'm glad that you liked it as well.

white_cross_b March 13 2008, 13:42:01 UTC

AHAHA! I have now written gender!switch, mpreg, and het!sex, all in one fic! Too bad I didn't throw in some tentacles while I was at it, but that's for another fic at another time. I should have given them a pink sparkly little girl! BWEE!

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white_cross_b March 13 2008, 13:43:02 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad I managed to pull it off.

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white_cross_b March 13 2008, 13:44:56 UTC

BEST. FEEDBACK. EVER.

How do you feel about tentacle fics? 0:-D

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white_cross_b March 14 2008, 13:26:04 UTC

HEH. tentacle pr0n is on my list of fics to write and has been for a few months now. It's definitely going to happen!

takara_to_yami March 13 2008, 10:58:59 UTC

I have nothing better to say about this other than: "I think I love you." :D

Seriously, better words fail me right now.

white_cross_b March 13 2008, 13:45:43 UTC

SCORE! \o/

Thank you so much!

kalldoro March 13 2008, 11:26:20 UTC

I have a semi-secret. I like mpreg stories and this is a really good one. Sadly there aren't very many good ones, but this one definitely is.

Awesome! :D

white_cross_b March 13 2008, 13:47:15 UTC

Well, I'm glad this was to your liking then! It was so much fun to write. Thanks so much for the feedback.