Fic: Falling From Grace

[white_cross_b]

Fic: Falling From Grace
Author: white_cross_b
Pairing/Series: Weiß Kreuz, Aya/Yohji
Rating: NC-17
Beta: whymzycal

Notes: This fic is for elflady_2001 , for her generous contribution to livelongnmarry . I hope it's what you were hoping for!

This is a continuation of sorts of Learning To Fly, which MUST be read first.

Comments

[kinukitty]

I really like this! And somehow I missed the first part, so I went back and read it, and I really liked that, too! So it was a bonus two-fer! I wish I could leave coherent feedback, but I don't think we want to wait for me to regain access to my brain this week. So I'll just say Aya's weariness and love for Yoji really come through, in an unexpected but very coherent way. I like the tone and the details and Aya's kind of flat affect. And, oh yeah, the intimacy of Yoji's inner thigh.

The first version was lovely, too. Very nice mood, melancholy and longing... I was also really pleased when Aya showed up and fucked Yoji against the wall. That's just the way things should go, sometimes.

Vampires and Aya and Yoji, these are a few of my favorite things...

[white_cross_b]

I've never been behind on commenting before. o.o

Thank you for this! I had bad writers block, and found it hard to get into the spirit of the original at first, so I kind of struggled.

I'm a big fan of walls. *snicker* Sometimes they just make everything better.

[kinsugi]

*points up* kinukitty and others said it much better than I could, tired and sleepless at midnight with japanese homework still to do!! I'm grateful that you were asked to write this, because vampire!Aya and Yohji are so very right, especially on a dark October night. Thank you!

[white_cross_b]

Oooh, I didn't even think about the timing of this fic! So glad you liked it. :-D