same old thing....

[white_gangsters]

Alright kids, I have a final copy of my personal statement cut below. It is 4,493 characters. So, basically, it is the right size, it says what I want it to say, and most importantly it is done...BUT I need people to check it over for any grammar mistakes because I want to submit my application already. The 16th will mark one month since I opened

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[breaktown]

*Sorry I just logged into LiveJournal - but for what it's worth.... I copied and pasted and made corrections in the text. Since I've taken two really intense writing courses - I'm actually pretty good with grammar. Good luck Lexi

part 2

[breaktown]

*LJ made me split this into two parts cause it was too long. Here's the second part

Re: part 2

[white_gangsters]

hey! thank you so much. I actually have a more final version, but I'm reading through you comments and changing it up some more. I really, really appreciate you reading through it and helping me out since i SUCK with grammar (i know, shock and surprise!). <3-thanks