lalalalalala this pairing needs more fic

Jul 20, 2008 16:55

apologies
raikou/gau of nabari no ou
sometimes, gau would pretend to be asleep. but it was always better when he didn't.
set at some point after episode 15

he always looked forward to Raikou's visits )

fanfiction, nabari no ou, finished

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For posterity. ninthinning July 21 2008, 00:39:12 UTC
♥♥♥♥♥♥

): They really do need more fic. I THINK YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE BECAUSE WEH.

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ninthinning July 21 2008, 00:41:29 UTC
YOU KNOW, THIS ACTUALLY MAKES MY RAIKOUMUSE TORN BETWEEN HAPPY AND SAD.

Y U DO DAT.

/going to keep spamming? possibly.

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ninthinning July 21 2008, 02:02:56 UTC
I THINK MY FAVORITE PART IS LIKE.

WHERE RAIKOU'S VOICE CRACKS. BECAUSE I CAN HEAR IT IN MY HEAD AHAHAhahaha. ):

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whitebombshell July 21 2008, 16:53:00 UTC
FBJSVkjdnvkfnvk you're so retarded

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jayskittles July 21 2008, 03:14:15 UTC
Ahaha, oh wow.

This is really good. And it's very in-character. Kind of AU, kind of not, I don't care. I like the part where raikou walked in with his sword--shit, I can't type. Sitting at a weird angle with my laptop--anyway, you're really good.

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whitebombshell July 21 2008, 16:46:15 UTC
Thank you! :D

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jayskittles July 22 2008, 05:32:12 UTC
Ahha, you're welcome.
Man, I ought to draw something cool, since I can't write worth shit.

Then again, I probably shouldn't draw either. I don't draw anything hot, just some stupid Wizard of Oz parodies.

....of course, if that's anyone's thing.....

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hopelessosaka July 21 2008, 04:53:22 UTC
That blew me over and brightened up my day. I seriously thank you; it usually doesn't happen (the brightening up my day portion). <3

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whitebombshell July 21 2008, 16:46:39 UTC
Awww I'm glad to hear it! <3 Thanks~

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nommon July 21 2008, 07:03:17 UTC
That was very good. I was trying to think of something to write for this pairing and I KNEW I had to do a hospital scene, but it seems you beat me to it.

And you did much better than I could have! Excellent!

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whitebombshell July 21 2008, 16:52:27 UTC
!!! No! You should write one too! Hospital scenes ftw. ): These two need more fic as it is!

But thank you. <3

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stearicacid July 21 2008, 20:16:23 UTC
I think it tore me up a little to see a sad, sweet little hospital scene for these two. Great job! Though there's one line that looks like you might have left something out:

"He had always thought that, in the end, it would be he who tried desperately to [insert word here] Raikou, when he finally decided Gau wasn’t interesting anymore."

I can't believe the frequency of posts at my little community! I'm planning out my multichapter adventure-y type story, and I have no idea if it will be set with Gau in or out of the hospital.

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whitebombshell July 22 2008, 03:02:41 UTC
... actually I think I meant to have a different word than 'tried.' I'm gonna. Go fix that, thanks. XD

:D <33 Thank you though! I love the pairing, so I'm glaaad there's a community for it.

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