Comments | whitechaos: My first short story that I will be posting on LJ

whitechaos

My first short story that I will be posting on LJ

Feb 24, 2006 17:42

The Thoughts Of A Tormented Child ( Read more... )

Comments 10

asilvermoon February 25 2006, 01:11:39 UTC

Gurl, id that's about you, you have no idea how much i understand.

Thanks whitechaos February 25 2006, 04:03:27 UTC

Really, Thank you.

wow gandalf7 February 25 2006, 03:30:10 UTC

I hate poems. Even stories that sound like poems. But i LOVED that. And you know what, the whole time i was thinking that this would totally aply to Kyo.

Re: wow whitechaos February 25 2006, 04:01:11 UTC

Thanks, I'm gonna read it at the next Golden Pen meeting. ^_^

Re: wow gandalf7 February 28 2006, 05:27:58 UTC

Yeah well you didnt. ;l

Re: wow whitechaos May 4 2006, 06:59:52 UTC

I don't think I understand. What do you mean?

Impressive angst. kantama February 25 2006, 03:55:18 UTC

Sad thing is I know it's true to an extent.

Excellent story.

Re: Impressive angst. whitechaos February 25 2006, 04:02:35 UTC

Thank you. Though you are right. It is true to some extent, but that's okay. ^_~

^-^ x_lovelle_x March 31 2006, 03:36:11 UTC

*squeal* i love it.it's darling in the mysterious prose you placed it in...keep on truckin ^_^

Re: ^-^ whitechaos April 4 2006, 04:47:22 UTC

Thanks!