Housefic: Fermata

[whitefox_69]

Title: Fermata
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~2k
Genre: Friendship, Pre-slash, Hurt/Comfort
Summary: Just a fluffy little fix-it fic based on House's lovely doomsday speech at the end of 7x01, "Now What".
AN: Still not happy with this, but I'm tired of staring at it so I might as well post it while it's still timely.  First House fic, concrit much appreciated

Comments

[petitecuriosity]

Oh. My. God! *incoherent screeching* This is absolutely beautiful! (I hope this is how things end up on the show. Bittersweet and lovely!) :) I just. I love this story! The idea of them being at the end of their ropes, finally realizing that the other is still there...beautiful.

[whitefox_69]

Eee, thank you! That's the best comment I could've asked for, and within minutes of posting too! You've totally made my day. :D

I've always held onto the hope that this is sort of the way things will end...and I still do, actually. It's more or less what happens in the original Doyle cannon, after all. ^-^

[jezziejay]

I really enjoyed this. Very well written and very IC. Congrats on a great first posting!

[whitefox_69]

Glad you liked it! Thanks a lot!

[myownghost]

that's beautifully written! it was a pleasure to read, and i'm always glad of a happy ending. :)

[whitefox_69]

Yay, glad you enjoyed it. I'm a sucker for happy endings too. ;P

[srsly_yes]

Welcome. Mmmm. This was lovely.

Teensy fix: ...a foreign warmth settled against forehead...--his forehead?

[whitefox_69]

Oops. Fixed it, thanks!

[lifes_own_light]

Fantastic first fic! (Yay, alliteration!) I loved, loved how first Wilson then House realizes that when everyone else walks away the other is still there, as it should be. Very skilled writing. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

[whitefox_69]

Hee, alliteration. XD That's exactly what I was going for, glad it came across. Thanks for the comment, looking forward to writing more!