Fic-White Lies

May 30, 2007 17:07


Chapter two: Normal Day or Is it?

Why was I walking so fast?

The answer is very simple. Being the top model student in Phoenix High, I can’t help but having people goggle at me where ever I go. I yearned for privacy but in return, popularity was bestowed upon me.

“Wait Up!!” Changmin called out to me.

I turn and was roughly met by a huge bear hug ( Read more... )

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enkhgerel May 30 2007, 21:34:23 UTC
I like it. I like how the characters are devoloping. Did Yoochun and Junsu met already? or is it a work of fate? I noticed Junsu said HIM, so it is Yoochun. Well, i'll be waiting for the next chapter.

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whitefox_miyabi May 30 2007, 22:29:32 UTC
yay!!! *give u cookie*!!! ooh it is great that you are noticing things. uhuh you'll see how they meet later. We mean we are working on it right now XD Can't you tell anything yet, but it will be fun!!! ^.^ I'm glad you like the story so far. Stay up to date and Thank you so much for reading.

whitefox_miyabi

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enkhgerel May 31 2007, 00:15:46 UTC
ok. thanks i was kind a hungry. i'll wait. Keep up the good work.

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lonekamo May 30 2007, 21:54:29 UTC
im not 1st?
2nd ♥

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lonekamo May 30 2007, 21:55:02 UTC
back with comment later

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whitefox_miyabi May 30 2007, 22:30:51 UTC
awwww, sorry that u are not first!! XD!!! it's ok, your second that still a great thing. Very great, we'll be waiting for your comment. ^.^

lonekamo HWAITING!!!! XD

whitefox_miyabi

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untinnu May 30 2007, 23:13:26 UTC
LOL..Yoochun's soooooooooo cute!! and SuMin too!!!

gah!! they're all cute!! and yes..Yunho is 'confident'..

so..Yunjae's going to meet soon?

haha..OMG..can't wait!! I love Yoochun!!!! he's soooooooo cute in here!!!

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whitefox_miyabi May 30 2007, 23:17:08 UTC
hellooooooooooooo =]]]
thank you for reading!
well, jaeho is going to meet, but we don't know how soon =]]]
ahahhahaha mickey is really cute in here t__t he's so random too!

thank you for the comment!
continue to support us, we'll post soon!

-whitefox_miyabi

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iheartuknow May 31 2007, 01:47:46 UTC
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I LOVE this chappie!!!
hahaha "ANY chicks would be fine, even ME." I love this line! yoochunnie is so random, but I love it!!!
yunnie is too confident, maybe OVERLY confident!!
SeulGi is in here too *_*
ohhhhhhhhhh, they are going to meet in the internet cafe, right!! good....
I love this, good work! cant wait for more ^^

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whitefox_miyabi June 1 2007, 02:26:19 UTC
yikes i replied to your comment, but never notice that i didn't press reply. If u want to see the reply just go to this post. ^.^ there is nothing new beside the fact that we thank you for reading

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whitefox_miyabi May 31 2007, 02:54:58 UTC
hello.
i'm glad you liked this chapter!
ahahahahah mickey is always so random and funny, huh?
HAHAHAHAH I don't know if they're gonan meet in the internet cafe or not.
KEEP READING TO FIND OUT!

thank you for reading and posting a comment!

-whitefox_miyabi

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