Fic-White Lies CH.4+5

[whitefox_miyabi]

Sorry you guys, for not posting in 3-4 days. We tried our best to make this longer than normal. So yeah...2 chapters. ^.^ Please don't be mad at us, and hopefully everyone will read and comment. *we are very sorry*

Chapter 4: What you see is what you get?

‘Gosh being kicked out of the internet café is so embarrassing. I hope nobody from our school

Comments

[aznxbabe]

ooo rivals, intersting!! haha Enimes turn to lovers thing LOL. hehe JaeJoong works at Mozart 2, LOL cute, bet that JaeJoong makes those brownies lol.

haha YooSu is cute, all attention focused on one another ^^
aww I feel bad 4 minnie, who's he gunna get, or is it minfood? lol

hehe update soon =D

[aznxbabe]

FIRST!! lol
I just read my post, and saw all the spelling mistakes >.

[whitefoxbuns]

hahaha it's ok. It's late and you still reply that is the best thing we could get. Thank you for reading and comenting. If you are wondering who this is. Well i'm just one of the writers of White Lies. We decided to reply to reader's comment using our actual LJ username so yeah...I'm whitefoxbuns. ^.^WOW hahah you are always one of the first, I am very glad. Yes!!! they are enemies, LOL wow I would never thought people can see that Jaejoong might cooked the brownies but u pointed it out. Great job!!! you are a very good reader. ^.^ There will be more excitement coming up, don't worry of Changmin, we'll find him something beside porno to be occupy with.
Stay with us until next time ^.^

[_miyabi]

^AHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH. I'm sure we'll fine something Changmin can be occupied with beside porno. t_t what a bad child.

well i am _Miyabi or you can call me trangie =]
yes yes yes, it is probably that the brownies that yunho loves so much is made by jaejoong!

i hope you liked the chapter. =]
we haven't posted in a while so we decided to post two chapters.
and we'll try our best to post longer chapters.

thank you for commenting!

-trangie

[jaeho_forever]

omg...this is really getting really exciting and interesting...
now the yunho knows where jaejoong and the others are from...hee..hee..really wonder what will happen next...
furthermore, all of them are of the rich status...
yoosu is really cute..hope that jaeho will be up soon too..^_^

[_miyabi]

hello =]
yes yes yes! now they officially know each other.
lol everything is going to reveal soon [lol hopefully.]
yes they're all rich status.
i'll play a big part in their attitude and background.
i hope you don't mind that =]

yoosu is too cute!

thank you for posting a comment!

-trangie

[whitefoxbuns]

oh AWESOME TO YOU!!! i'm whitefoxbuns the other writer of White Lies. LOL hahaha don't wonder too hard, leave your mind open so when things come they will give you more thrill. hahaha we promise we give u more excitements. ^.^ yeah...we are tire of fics that made jaejoong or junsu the weaker guys. We don't like that so, equallity is everything to this story. So yes they are rich!!! mhuaaaa!!!
Gosh yoosu, we tried our best to make them the crack yet sweet couple of the story. They are the ties of jaeho aren't they. ^.^ thank you for reading!! we'll be updating soon

[untinnu]

ahhhh!! Yunho's liking Jae already!! Love it!! and hiring an investigator..awesome!! Yunho's taking some action!!! yeah!!!

OMG..can't wait for more..

and Joongie works at Mozart!!!!!!!! *giggles* Yunho's favorite brownies!! omo..everything's so perfect!!!

[_miyabi]

LOLL. yunho likes jaejoong, bu he's just is just in denial and is not aware of it himself. ahahahha.

=]yes yes jaejoong work at yunho's favorite brownie shop!
i hope you liked the chapter.

thank you for posting a comment!

-trangie

[untinnu]

OMG..like it? I LOVE IT!! hehe..still excited about it after I finished reading it..

Yunjae finally met!!

Omo..everything's just perfect!! wonder how things will be since Yunjae already know that they're rivals!!!

[whitefoxbuns]

hhahah still excited? hahah yay!!! we hope u open your mind for more to come, cuz we are going to throw in everything a jaeho/yoosu fan would want. Yep rivals funny and hard isn't it. Don't worry we got the whole thing planned out. ^.^

[8lucky8]

this was a really good chapter but i can't wait to see what happen between jaejoong and yunho. when they meet for next time when they both know they are rival. so please update soon

[whitefoxbuns]

hahah thank you so much for reading and commenting. I am one of the writers of white lies. It's been great to see the comments you guys give us. Don't worry we make it more fun and exciting the next time they come face to face. We'll try updating soon, but the longer the chapter to longer time it takes. But we'll try our best cuz it is fun for us to write this. ^.^ thank you

[_miyabi]

hello! i'l glad you like this chapter. =]]
yes next time they meet they'll know each other as rivals!
that's where the story begins!

i'll try our best to update soon with longer chapters =]]
thank you for posting a comment!

-trangie

[moonbin_is_love]

i really curious about what will happen next between yunho and jaejoong.
i love this fic!<3333
update soon ne? =D
btw, ur new reader here ^^

[_miyabi]

hello!
AHAHAHHAHA, omg i'm in love with your icon!
it's too cute =]]
i'm glad you love this fic!
we will try our best to write longer chapters and post as soon as possible!
welcome new reader! lol i always love new reader! <333

thank you for posting a comment!
all silent readers should join in and post a comment too!
it will surely make us both very happy!

-trangie