[FIC] secret

[whitehime]

Title: secret

Author: me

Rating: perfectly safe

Summary: jin insult ueda and ryo change being kind to ueda..im sorry I can’t write the good summary

Genre: romance.maybe??

Pairing: ryoda

I know its not good but please read..

It’s only my imagination…I just want you to enjoy this..

Comments

[kaitovsheiji]

hi!

I have just read it and I can say it's...

a very GOOD fic!!

I like the way you explain the facts...

I hope I can continue reading your fics, even if you do a lot of mistakes while writing your ideas are amazing (I would kill for that kind of ideas, really)

As I said, I want to read more of your fics, so keep writing, please!

PS: I'm going to add you as a friend, mind adding me back?

[whitehime]

thx..

im really happy you like it.
even the grammar is bad..haha
gomen ne if you hard to understand my story...

ps:
i have add u back..thx 4 adding me as your friend..
nice to meet you..
im rida..

[kaitovsheiji]

Marina desu~

you don't have to worry that much for the grammar, you'll see the more you write, the less your mistakes will be (i'm not sure if this phrase is easy to understand, i've just translated literally one of my country's expression, so it might no mean nothing)....

i do a lot of mistakes too, but i keep trying, hope you'll do the same...

[whitehime]

Mari-chan..i will call u that..
Is it ok?

Its a good phrase
I love writing n reading fic too coz beside its really interesting n can make a friend also its improve my english,well not really good actually..n i the big reason because i love jhonnys n japan..
I will continu writing too
Ganbatte ne

[tokoyam1]

bhuauauhahahhaha....

ryo choo kawaiiii...

thank you for sharing..

[whitehime]

ur welcome..
happy u like it

thx 4 read n comment

[fancyann1974]

aaahhhh loved it...lol...so cute, ryo fainted from happiness
thank you so much for sharing

[whitehime]

thx 4 reading