[FIC] the first chocolate

[whitehime]

Tittle: the first chocolate

Rating : safe

Author: me

Genre: romance

Summary: this is the first time ueda make a chocolate

I know it’s not good but please read it..

By the way HAPPY VALENTINE…

Comments

[yunizhamasaki]

so sweet
ryo really care about tat chan
thanks for the fic

[whitehime]

u r fast..
im care too about tatchan..haha
thx 4 reading

[floppy_snoopi]

it's really a nice story :) really cute :p

but it would be even better if you can found someone to beta it for you ^_^

[whitehime]

thx 4 reading..

i want someone beta my fic too..
how can i request beta?
i don't understand it..

[kaitovsheiji]

aw~ Ryo is sweet in such a caring mood.

I love it!!

Keep writing fics like this.

[whitehime]

yes ryo is sweet..
i love ryo who really take care his hime..

thx 4 reading

[ueda_fangirl]

ghehehehe its sweet

i would love to see if ueda did wrote a text on the chocolate heart shape >D

[whitehime]

im not a baby..
but even you take care of me like a baby i still love u so much...

that's ueda say in his chocolate..^_^

thx 4 reading..

Ryoda~

[tacchan_hime]

KYAA~
CUTE~
>.<
Ryo so caring~
Tatchan cute~
Very very cute fic *squeal*
It's been a while since you hiatus because yous study~

Rida~
Bth beta?
Minta request aja, ada di ryoda_love kok!
Disana ada beta request, tinggal isi aja ato ga ditiap fic yg km post, tawarin sapa yg mw jd beta readermu~
Btw, dulu ikut nobar BTR tak?

Re: Ryoda~

[whitehime]

g ikut...
Pdahal pngen..
Iy akhrny...i can writing again..'
Haha...

Oh request d ryoda love y?
Pngen ah..ancur grammarny..hehe