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Oct 25, 2006 20:32

Usually things don't get to me, and its been a while since I've been on here because I've been happy ad involved with other parts of my life. However, today I had to do a peer editing for my english class, and this was the paper I had to edit.
We'll just call the author Ana.

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ghostlion October 26 2006, 23:03:31 UTC
Ugh.
That's all I have to say.
Sorry Cub.

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hdofu October 27 2006, 05:35:57 UTC
The Bible says love thy neighbor as thyself and reminds christians we our temples for the dwelling of God. It also says every man has sinned... in short... I don't see a person is gay or straight, I see a person. This essay is a cry for attention a desire to stir dischord and to arrouse a spirit of anger.

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babyroo14 October 28 2006, 02:04:09 UTC
huggles

i dont think you really have to beilve everything the the Bible says no one has a original copy so who knows what was really there from the start and what someone may have added over time i think when it comes down to it its more importiant to be happy with who we all really are and be nice to each other hell if mistakes werent ok god wouldnt have gave us free will right?

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...Things like this.. light_lion October 31 2006, 00:41:03 UTC
I know I'm commenting on this one incredibly late here [I'm in Boston right now on vacation] but this one.. late commenting on or not... still gets to me ( ... )

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