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whiteshark

Avatar // Her Place Is // Part 1 of 2

Sep 05, 2006 18:43

Title: Her Place Is
Fandom: Avatar
Rating: K+
Word Count: 729
Summary: Katara stayed because she was needed. She left because she was asked.
Other: 31_days 09/05/06, . Postwar fic.

( September 05. between two worlds I do belong )

fandom:avatar:ship:zutara, rating:k_plus, comms:31_days-2006-009, fandom:avatar, length:ficlet, ficverse:places

Comments 23

loveroftheflame September 6 2006, 03:08:48 UTC

This has to be the most beautiful non-Zutara Zutara fic I ever read. Bravo!

whiteshark September 6 2006, 03:38:21 UTC

#^_^#

Thank you

renuki September 6 2006, 03:34:09 UTC

That... that was sad, yet, it... was beautiful.

^_^

Poor Zuko.

whiteshark September 6 2006, 03:41:31 UTC

I'm quite proud of it, myself. :) Thank you.

Zukotorture is just so easy. He lends himself to it.

renuki September 6 2006, 03:41:57 UTC

You are welcome.

Yeah.

romanitas September 6 2006, 05:10:43 UTC

Interesting~ :3

whiteshark September 6 2006, 05:15:38 UTC

Thank you :)

vejibra September 6 2006, 15:06:16 UTC

Beautiful ;o;, you can see the loyalty of Katara to Zuko, although both don't have a “more intimate relation” than a deep friendship… I want to read the second part. ^_^

whiteshark September 6 2006, 15:10:36 UTC

All fandom is bereft of friendship fic, which is in turn nicely untapped. Tank you.

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whiteshark September 7 2006, 06:12:24 UTC

Friendship is something that just sort of ... clicks, with my writing. UST is a little harder, and out and out romance is nigh impossible for me to do and feel anything but horror over.

One in the same, yep. There's not enough room in the world for two of me.

Also - thank you!

Thread 8

jade_sabre_301 September 6 2006, 20:11:25 UTC

typo? "Aang, who was more useful out making assurances that the war was indeed over and he did indeed back to stay." --> should it be "he did indeed COME back to stay?"

I have to agree with loveroftheflame on this one--I love how it's Zutara but not really Zutara all at once. Wonderfully creative, wonderfully written, and heartbreaking too. Oh. I...I really, really like this piece.

can't wait for part two!

whiteshark September 6 2006, 23:39:02 UTC

Oops. Fixed that - thank you.

I'm glad so many folk think it's pretty; I wasn't sure if I had accomplished that or not.