What a NOVEL idea!

[whitesiren1034]

Chapter 1

Comments

That's pretty good.

[shadowquill]

It's very dreamlike. I like that. The only advice I have at the moment is keep writing! *smiles*

Re: That's pretty good.

[whitesiren1034]

Tje girl has been through something very tramatic and comes out scarred, what she does to deal is build a perfect world inside her head. At the end, she dissapears forever with the boy she loves and is never seen again. What she does is actually creats this place with her mind and goes to live there away from everyone else. Very sad tale of pain but it ends happilty for her!

"Very sad tale of pain but it ends happilty for her!"

[shadowquill]

Oh, good. It sounds fascinating.