This is beautiful, but I'm puzzled by the way it seems to cut off so abruptly at the end. Is that intentional, to mean something? I missed it, I'm afraid...
I don't know, actually, hehe...I just felt like I had written all I had, you know..? I don't know if that makes any sense. It's supposed to be sort of abstract, the whole story, no real plot, so that's why I ended it abruptly, and to make it seem a little more angsty and hopeless. I dunno, that's just how I see things, if that makes any sense...
O_o wow its amazing and great detail too seems like a one-shot then an actual fanfic but thats not what I care about just reallt good stories and yours gave that to me.
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And thanks a ton!
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