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The Granddaughter Paradox (Susan, Eleven | G)

Aug 11, 2009 21:40

Title: The Granddaughter Paradox
Author: neutralalienist
Characters/Pairings: Susan, Eleventh Doctor
Rating: G
Summary: Everything changes when Susan meets her grandfather again.
Word Count: 1000
Original Story: The Grandfather Paradox,
by glinda-penguin
Notes: Many thanks to hhertzof for betareading!

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character: susan foreman, character: eleventh doctor, rating: g, remixer: neutralalienist, original author: glinda_penguin

Comments 12

glinda_penguin August 11 2009, 21:49:09 UTC

Excellent, you took a rather silly ficlet and made it into something rather more substantial, well done. I like having Susan's perspective on this (little brother, hehehe).

Also! Backstory for Bob!

shobogan August 14 2009, 17:18:36 UTC

I'm so glad you like it! :D

Bob was one of my favourite parts of the original.

amaresu August 12 2009, 04:59:12 UTC

This is fantastic. I love Bob and finding them again and that little line about the word TARDIS echoing back into history.

Lovely fic all around.

shobogan August 14 2009, 17:19:24 UTC

Thank you! Susan picks them just as well as her grandpa, clearly.

I couldn't resist the TARDIS fanwankery.

radiantbaby August 12 2009, 09:12:43 UTC

This is so beautiful. *wibble*

shobogan August 15 2009, 00:23:46 UTC

*beams* Thank you.

scarlettgirl August 12 2009, 16:25:58 UTC

This was lovely. There needs to be more Susan fic!

shobogan August 14 2009, 17:19:47 UTC

Thank you. There really, really does.

elliptic_eye August 13 2009, 20:57:11 UTC

I love the way this brought home that this is a new sort of relationship for both of them. Really lovely.

shobogan August 14 2009, 17:21:11 UTC

Thank you! That's the bit that fascinates me, about regeneration, how things change.