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[whoajessica]

title: clarity
rating: g
pairing: max/fang
word count: 2,290
summary: i realized that i had just been ogling at fang for god knows how long. and he was still staring at me-quite fixedly, might i add.

click here for the fanfic. it's been moved to my fic-only comm.

Comments

[superciliary]

OH, I LOVE this. You captured their relationship perfectly; I can definitely see Fang doing this for Max. :)

And thanks for posting it to maxfang!

[whoajessica]

Oh man, thank you so much for the lovely comment! :D Max + Fang = adorable. <3

[superciliary]

No problem, you deserved it! :D
There definitely isn't enough Max/Fang fanfiction out there. Well, GOOD fanfiction, haha.

[whoajessica]

I'm right there with you! I'm so tired of reading as Max and Fang make out... whatever happened to the simple stuff? =) And again, thanksss. :D

[prowl]

Great job!

[whoajessica]

Thanks! :D

[jennlynnfs]

That was fantastic. I loved how you used the lunar eclipse as a metaphor for Fang and Max's relationship. That was so well done.

Thanks for sharing!

[whoajessica]

Ahh, thank you so much for the lovely comment! =)

[crazy_singer]

Aww! That was ADORABLE! You did a great job writing in Max's POV! And as a few people have already said, you've captured their relationship really well!

[whoajessica]

Aw, yay, thank you so much! :D

Cool!

[crystal_wings99]

AWESOME! This is the best Fan-made Maximum Ride stuff I've ever seen! It's brilliant! Seriously! How did you do it? What gave you the idea?

Re: Cool!

[whoajessica]

Wow, I'm glad you like it so much! :D I got the idea whenever I actually saw this lunar eclipse for myself... it took place in February, I believe. =) Thank you for the lovely comment. <3

Re: Cool!

[crystal_wings99]

<3 you're welcome! You deserved the lovely comment!
Fly High
Crystal_Wings
P.S: Support Fang's Blog! Go online to www.maximumride.blogspot.com

Re: Cool!

[whoajessica]

Haha, I check there practically every day... gotta love Fang. :D