Comments | whogeek: Fic: "Home is Where the Spirit Is" (Steve/Danny) Hawaii Five-0 PG-13

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Fic: "Home is Where the Spirit Is" (Steve/Danny) Hawaii Five-0 PG-13

Apr 24, 2012 19:04

Title: "Home is Where the Heart Spirit Is"
Author: whogeek
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Characters/Pairings: Steve/Danny, Grace, Mary
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 8842
Warnings: Sillyness, fluff, Steve is emotionally constipated, kinda-sorta-not-really character death?
Genre: Supernatural, AU, Fluff, a bit of H/C
Prompt/Summary: Steve is a SEAL who gets hurt and ends up ( Read more... )

steve mcgarrett, fandom, fic, danny williams, muses, hawaii five-0, grace williams

Comments 40

jetpack_angel April 25 2012, 07:03:05 UTC

I would like to add a second EEEEEEEEE! Oh, this was perfect and so them! I was giggling in so many places I lost count.

whogeek April 25 2012, 16:30:10 UTC

Technically, it's a third, but you wouldn't have seen the second one(one of the drawbacks of screening comments). I'm glad you like it so much! :D And that it made you giggle. It had the potential to be so sad, but... I'm such a sucker for happy endings. XD

wolwiegirl3 April 25 2012, 07:35:52 UTC

so fun and cute !

whogeek April 25 2012, 16:30:27 UTC

:D Glad you like!

bfive0 April 25 2012, 08:17:30 UTC

AAAAAAAH Just like heaven is one of my favorite movies and seeing that you took the prompt made me squee like the true fangirl that I am!!!!! This was perfect :D

whogeek April 25 2012, 16:33:14 UTC

Hee, thanks. I haven't seen the movie, but I liked the prompt, so I grabbed it. Glad it worked for you. :D

morgana7266 April 25 2012, 10:38:08 UTC

I liked the movie with Reese Witherspoon, but this is so much better! Lovely story. :-)

whogeek April 25 2012, 16:39:35 UTC

That makes me very happy! Thanks for the lovely compliment! :D

antivol April 25 2012, 12:12:21 UTC

I've just finished reading and first of all I want to thank you because this left me feeling really good, happy and hopeful. It's a wonderful tale, interesting and fun, with a perfect ending. Love how the characters interact, how Steve's relationships with Danny, Grace and his sister evolve until Danny's love finally get him back. Your writing is great, too, with many details about the settings and the characters so that the reader really feels what happens. I enjoyed the read very much, thanks a lot for sharing!

whogeek April 25 2012, 16:41:47 UTC

Thanks!! That's such a huge compliment for a writer, that the reader feels what happens. :D Makes me feel really good and happy. :D