Comments | wholuvsya: Lj Idol Topic Two: Three Little Words

wholuvsya

Oct 28, 2011 11:35

It started like any other love story ( Read more... )

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basric October 29 2011, 07:02:56 UTC

Shocking in its simplicity. Well done.

wholuvsya October 29 2011, 22:11:07 UTC

thank you

sparkleoflife October 29 2011, 10:07:57 UTC

Extremely moving

wholuvsya October 29 2011, 22:11:18 UTC

thanks hon

noodledays October 29 2011, 20:05:04 UTC

I liked the variety of phrases you used here. it's put together well.

wholuvsya October 29 2011, 22:11:26 UTC

thank you

myrna_bird October 29 2011, 21:40:20 UTC

In a nutshell.
Sadly, quite typical.

wholuvsya October 29 2011, 22:11:38 UTC

short and not so sweet, eh?

frecklestars October 29 2011, 21:40:58 UTC

This was wonderful. I thought the staccato sentences might kind of choke it, but they really worked. Well done.

wholuvsya October 29 2011, 22:12:05 UTC

thank you, I was a bit nervous about the repetitive three word phrases; figured it would either make it or break it, kwim?