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whyamisoclever February 14 2012, 21:56:39 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it! :)

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cdewilde February 14 2012, 05:41:38 UTC
I'm really loving your fic! I was so excited to see an update tonight. :D

The only thing I would point out is that, even while wearing kevlar, getting shot in the chest will still leave a bruise and possibly some broken ribs. Other than that, this is great! So much fun to read.

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whyamisoclever February 14 2012, 21:56:18 UTC
Thank you! :D

Ah, I did sort of wonder if I might have missed something with the whole Kevlar/guns/getting shot thing...oh well. It doesn't look like something I can fix necessarily, but I think I'll add a mention of that oversight into one of my author's notes. Thanks for catching it!

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chibi_nikiki February 15 2012, 03:05:18 UTC
*squee* I am so happy to see this updated. I can not wait to see how all this plays out. I can also see this happening as if it were really an episode. As always I will be on the look out for the next chapter! ^_^

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whyamisoclever February 16 2012, 02:22:46 UTC
Yay, thank you!

I can also see this happening as if it were really an episode.

I keep having self-conscious, doubtful moments about whether I am in any capacity managing to pull this thing off, so that really means a lot to me. I'm glad you like it so far! :)

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the_moogie February 16 2012, 12:24:49 UTC
Freakin' awesome! I am loving this. Great description, great in-character voices and actions. So fun. Can't wait to see where it goes.

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whyamisoclever February 20 2012, 00:55:33 UTC
Ahhhh, thank you so much! I don't think I have ever commented on any of your fics, but I have read them all (some multiple times) and really enjoyed them. I'm glad (and flattered) that you're enjoying this! :)

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dollysgirl04 February 18 2012, 07:49:31 UTC
This is fantastic, I'm hooked :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

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whyamisoclever February 20 2012, 00:57:00 UTC
Thank you! It may be a little while for the next chapter, but I get the feeling that this story is going to contain rather long chapters, so hopefully it will be worth the wait!

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