I'm really loving your fic! I was so excited to see an update tonight. :D
The only thing I would point out is that, even while wearing kevlar, getting shot in the chest will still leave a bruise and possibly some broken ribs. Other than that, this is great! So much fun to read.
Ah, I did sort of wonder if I might have missed something with the whole Kevlar/guns/getting shot thing...oh well. It doesn't look like something I can fix necessarily, but I think I'll add a mention of that oversight into one of my author's notes. Thanks for catching it!
*squee* I am so happy to see this updated. I can not wait to see how all this plays out. I can also see this happening as if it were really an episode. As always I will be on the look out for the next chapter! ^_^
I can also see this happening as if it were really an episode.
I keep having self-conscious, doubtful moments about whether I am in any capacity managing to pull this thing off, so that really means a lot to me. I'm glad you like it so far! :)
Ahhhh, thank you so much! I don't think I have ever commented on any of your fics, but I have read them all (some multiple times) and really enjoyed them. I'm glad (and flattered) that you're enjoying this! :)
Thank you! It may be a little while for the next chapter, but I get the feeling that this story is going to contain rather long chapters, so hopefully it will be worth the wait!
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The only thing I would point out is that, even while wearing kevlar, getting shot in the chest will still leave a bruise and possibly some broken ribs. Other than that, this is great! So much fun to read.
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Ah, I did sort of wonder if I might have missed something with the whole Kevlar/guns/getting shot thing...oh well. It doesn't look like something I can fix necessarily, but I think I'll add a mention of that oversight into one of my author's notes. Thanks for catching it!
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I can also see this happening as if it were really an episode.
I keep having self-conscious, doubtful moments about whether I am in any capacity managing to pull this thing off, so that really means a lot to me. I'm glad you like it so far! :)
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