"Title from Darius Rucker's History in the Making" I was wondering, because I immediately thought of that song when I saw the title :).
I adore this, especially I think, because I do view them as having more than one first kiss. But it wasn't until I read this, until I realized they had more than two first kisses.
In #3, I agree with Kevin about Scotty's hair, haha! And I giggled when Scotty said Kevin could lay off the pick up lines.
I also like how you included the hindsight as part of the scenes. I don't know if you intended it this way, but for me that made the scenes read more like a reflection intermingled with a more present tense feel, which I think works well with the concept of "History in the Making".
Also, with the last one, not only is easy not all it's cracked up to be, but also, it would be easier for him to live with the turmoil that is Kevin than to try and fight it off.
And in case you couldn't tell, I love the Darius Rucker song :-D.
I don't know if you intended it this way, but for me that made the scenes read more like a reflection intermingled with a more present tense feel, which I think works well with the concept of "History in the Making". Hmmm, interesting. I did intend for a bit of reflection at the end of some of the kisses, but I didn't make the connection with the title. Good catch!
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I love the trip down memory ;)
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I was wondering, because I immediately thought of that song when I saw the title :).
I adore this, especially I think, because I do view them as having more than one first kiss. But it wasn't until I read this, until I realized they had more than two first kisses.
In #3, I agree with Kevin about Scotty's hair, haha! And I giggled when Scotty said Kevin could lay off the pick up lines.
I also like how you included the hindsight as part of the scenes. I don't know if you intended it this way, but for me that made the scenes read more like a reflection intermingled with a more present tense feel, which I think works well with the concept of "History in the Making".
Also, with the last one, not only is easy not all it's cracked up to be, but also, it would be easier for him to live with the turmoil that is Kevin than to try and fight it off.
And in case you couldn't tell, I love the Darius Rucker song :-D.
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I don't know if you intended it this way, but for me that made the scenes read more like a reflection intermingled with a more present tense feel, which I think works well with the concept of "History in the Making".
Hmmm, interesting. I did intend for a bit of reflection at the end of some of the kisses, but I didn't make the connection with the title. Good catch!
Thanks for reading!
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