Finally, i've been waiting for you to write more! :3
This one's good, getting to see the angry Linc and everything. And so Tancredi is introduced also, I liek that you brought her in to straighten some things up. Though it is sort of clumsy to have her blabber that much about Michael to Linc, who she's never met before... But otherwise, great job, and I'd love to read more! :heart:
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This one's good, getting to see the angry Linc and everything. And so Tancredi is introduced also, I liek that you brought her in to straighten some things up. Though it is sort of clumsy to have her blabber that much about Michael to Linc, who she's never met before...
But otherwise, great job, and I'd love to read more! :heart:
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