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wiccan_goth

Chapter one, Part 2

Jan 29, 2007 14:50

Chapter one, Part 2“You are going to paradise.” Death pushed the green jewel on the necklace and a dark emerald spiraling portal opened up in front of them. Death smiled but it was that same sad smile. Ville’s fear at the hospital came back ten-fold ( Read more... )

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anonymous January 29 2007, 21:08:29 UTC

oh wow that was awsome i really like where u goin wid this one
bam's a bastard in this one haha poor ville :( i hope hes happy
in the after world
xxx

wiccan_goth January 29 2007, 21:10:48 UTC

♥
yep but wait for Chapter 2...

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wiccan_goth January 29 2007, 21:30:14 UTC

chapter 2 is coming soon,i have to write an english paper first

midget666 January 29 2007, 23:18:53 UTC

Oh, wow! This is so interesting! Poor Ville! Please more soon!

bloodhill January 29 2007, 23:50:02 UTC

Wow...so, so good! I love this and can't wait to see how it goes. I'm pissed at Bam now. ♥++

wiccan_goth January 29 2007, 23:51:49 UTC

yay I'm glad you like it your one of my favorite authors on here! ♥

dead_nightmares January 30 2007, 00:22:12 UTC

Aww. I love this! Poor Ville! Please update again soon! I can't wait for more!! <3