Vam fanfic

[wiccan_goth]

it doesnt have a name yet but tell me if you like it

Comments

[bloodhill]

I liked it, can't wait to see where it goes. More soon?

[wiccan_goth]

yep i just have to type it..

[snowisgreat]

I like it too, and I suppose it will be cleared later just exactly what relationship they have? First I thought they where together, Ville getting so close to Bam, but I don't think they are, are they?

Hehe, Ville is acting like a real girl, getting angry so easily :D

[wiccan_goth]

no not yet.... ^_^

[persianfire]

It's a good start...I like how you kind of plunge right into the conversation, and nothing really is revealed yet.

I'm also intrigued as to where Linde fits into it all:)

I noticed a few times you didn't capitalise Ville and Bam's names, and I think the author note towards the end kind of stalls your story. either put it in notes at the end if you want people to know what it means, or leave it out. Your story will be much better for it!

[wiccan_goth]

oh thanks ^_^

[villesprincess]

hehe this looks good :D I can't wait to see how this story develops. :D