Comments | wicked_enough: WLP No. 10: Bloom

wicked_enough

WLP No. 10: Bloom

Aug 15, 2006 13:47

I won't lie about why I put up this super late updation of Wicked Little Pieces.

I wanted to show off this new icon.

I admit it, are you happy now?! I ADMIT IT!!!

Title: Bloom
Pairing(s): SasuSaku
Genre(s): General
Rating: K+

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Facing the sky.

Immortality was impossible, and after years and years, Orochimaru could finally realize it. The ( Read more... )

naruto, fanfiction, sasusaku, wicked little pieces

Comments 20

aradiantsun August 15 2006, 21:14:03 UTC

The icon is awesome, I don't blame you for wanting to show it off.

after years and year, Orochimaru, I think you left the "s" off of the second "years", but other than that this was a nice one. I love this sentence: "All he could see was her, because now she had changed, had grown, had become... a goddess."

And I totally agree with you on the "how many Chidori Sasuke could do" thing. *thumbs up* It seems a lot of people forget what it can do to the user.

wicked_enough August 15 2006, 21:24:28 UTC

^__^ Thanks for your compliment regarding my icon, and also for catching my grammar problems. you are my personal grammar police ^____^

Tell me about it! I also have an issue about how people naturally assume that Sasuke is going to be ANBU. I mean, most people seem to forget that most of the Uchiha Clan were in the police force, not ANBU, though I suppose this peeve was brought on by everyone who thought it was weird that Sasuke was a policeman in Words of Advice. My thoughts were this: Sasuke wants to rebuild his clan, so why not start with his family's prestige as the Konoha Police Force?

... Why must I rant constantly?

aradiantsun August 15 2006, 21:31:49 UTC

You're welcome on both counts. Oooh, do I get a shiny badge?!

YESYESYESYESYES!!! Zomg, I was thinking the same thing last night and earlier today. He said he wanted to enlist in the police force when he was little, and I think he'd try to do that should he get a happy ending. I do think that it'd be questioned how well a former traitor could discipline people, but I think that his family's ties would be too deep to wave off. If he did become an ANBU I think it'd be just so that he could attain that level, to add it to his credentials, so to speak, but that he wouldn't want to risk his life when he's trying to increase his clan. That's just foolish.

I do the same thing all the time about nearly everything, so don't feel bad. *ats and offers a brownie*

wicked_enough August 18 2006, 04:43:48 UTC

You get a shiny badge that looks like Sasuke's police badge XDDD

EXACTAMUNDO! I also think that if he's to be ANBU it would be to be for credentials, or like Kakashi, only for the moment. I think that later in life Sasuke would definitely be in the police force, especially if Naruto is Hokage and Sakura is a medic (how can they have their three man team, than?!). Wahhh!!! How come other people don't understand this? T____T Also, if he was a policeman, wouldn't it look better than being ANBU, since being ANBU gives him more freedom and anonimity when people still don't trust him?

Ranting is how we blow off steam. That, and baked goods.

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zelha August 15 2006, 23:38:21 UTC

Just one emot: *___*

;D

wicked_enough August 18 2006, 04:44:15 UTC

Just one emot in return:

^___________^

akamai_hi August 16 2006, 00:36:21 UTC

Great fic. ^-^ I agree that the last line with Sasuke seeing Sakura as a goddess was great.

wicked_enough August 18 2006, 04:44:41 UTC

Thanks mucho mucho!

I lurve your icon ^^ Where's it from?

akamai_hi August 24 2006, 02:38:36 UTC

You're welcome. ^^

And my icon was made by xxoathkeeperxx from the avatar the last airbender fans community.

red_converse7 August 16 2006, 03:42:27 UTC

the icon is amazing... there is no denying it.

the story was also really good.. i don't think i have posted a comment before... but i like all the wicked little pieces .. they leave me wanting more in a good way!!

wicked_enough August 18 2006, 04:46:47 UTC

The same could be said for your icon ^^ Ramen is the food of my life and possibly my death in the future.

I'm really ^___^ that you like all the WLP! I originally just wrote them since they don't require updating, but also as a treat for the readers who can't bear to wait for new chapters of stuff. And don't worry about wanting more! I already have 17 written!

indierock4ever August 18 2006, 04:33:15 UTC

Ooh I love the icon. I should join those fangirls.

And as always, beautiful drabble. It's a good idea about the Chidori thing. Every little detail is written well! xD

I was also wondering, when you post on FF.net, how do you make those liners? The horizontal line thingy. If it's possible to be made on Microsoft Word, that is.

wicked_enough August 18 2006, 04:50:02 UTC

I'm with you and the mob of fangirls.

Yay! Another person pleased with this drabble! To be honest I was worried it would be cliche and all that jazz, but it made the readers happy, then it's all good.

Oh yes, the liner thingies. Another reviewer asked me about those two was it you?. They can only be made in FF.Net, using the QuickEdit option. Any dividers provided by Microsoft Word, including some characters like ~, *, etc., don't show up... If you want, I can forward you the exact directions for getting the dividers on Quick Edit if you give me your e-mail address ^^

indierock4ever August 18 2006, 20:28:39 UTC

Yes! We love Itachi!
And you don't give yourself enough credit, really. I admire your writing style.

Nope, but it seems I'm not the only one wondering about it. If you have time, it'd be helpful to e-mail me at xsweetlikesugar@yahoo.com

Thank you so much!