Fic: Hunter's Blood (Arthur/Merlin) 2/4

[shadecat]

Comments

[katelynnlynn]

Don't know if you noticed, but you've got a section that repeats in here, starting with Merlin's dream down to the scene change.

[shadecat]

Ty for pointing it out. I got all frustrated during the posting cuz it was all supposed to be in 2, then I had to make it 3 then 4. *edits*

:)

[katelynnlynn]

Glad to help ^^

It really is a brilliant story, btw. I just got done reading it, but I figured I'd point it out before I forgot :P

[shadecat]

It really is appreciated.

I'm glad you like it as well :)

Thank you ♥

[accordingtomel]

Whee! Made it through the next section and now I MUST KEEP READING NO MATTER WHAT!! :D

Here were my thoughts I jotted down as I read:

Wheee!! OMG I was totally shocked at the vampyre attacking Merlin, even though I probably shouldn't have been. But yes...AWESOME! :D

Leon was as yet unaware of both the truth and lie those words carried. --> That was SUPER ominous and yet also incredibly intriguing!

I loved the way you portrayed Merlin and Leon's relationship in this part actually, as well as Arthur's jealousy over Leon's concern for Merlin, even though I suspect there's nothing to be worried about and Arthur won't readily admit he is jealous.

Despite the serious nature of what was going on, this part was really hilarious! And awkward, with the whole "virgin" conversation. Though I loved it quite a lot... Poor Merlin. How utterly embarassing for him!

Also, yay for Merlin choosing Arthur. Leon is a great option, but he's unfortunately no Arthur! Can't wait to keep reading -- yay!! \o/

[shadecat]

I had so much fun writing the 'virgin' convo. I literally lol'd through it as I wrote it. Cuz I could just picture them all in Gaius's room, shuffling their feet and trying NOT to look at each other :D

Leon will eventually hook up with Gawain - or at least, that's what I'm intending. I don't really have control over any of this.

[emeraldteal]

Hee, I didn't expect virgin!Merlin. I thought the creature was after his magic. *g*

Nice scene between the Gaius, Arthur, Leon and Merlin. The awkwardness! And then Leon and Arthur waiting patiently for Merlin, and Merlin making his choice. Aaaawww, don't worry Leon, there are lots of fangirls here for you. :D

*continues reading*

[shadecat]

I like spicing it up :D

I loved that scene. It was one of my fave parts. I was lol'ing while writing it... which made writing it kind of hard - but totally worth it :D

LEON WILL GET HIS, DON'T YOU WORRY!
Just not in this installment. I'll probably hook him up with his intended either in the sequel or the one after that.

:)

[thepowerofme]

LOL Oh poor Merlin, that conversation must have been horrible for him to have, and then to have to actually pick either Arthur or Leon...! I'm suprised he didn't pick Leon just because he liked Arthur so much... but hen, I suppose that would defeat the point of the story. Oh well, BRILLIANT story so far! I'm really enjoying it and was in stitches over the virgin conversation. lol

As for the Vampyre, I love that it turned up in Merlin's room to attack him. I wasn't expecting that at all! And I love how Gaius was involved as well. It's not often that we get an accurate and active portrayal of Gaius in fanfiction, well imo anyway. Great chapter! Looking forward to reading the rest! XD

[shadecat]

I was literally lol'ing WHILE writing that part. It was brill :)

*claps* TY so much. I was really hoping that I'd actually captured them as canon characters. I'm hoping I continue o be able to.

♥
I hope you like the rest. :)

[mia_dcwut_09]

aww i was hoping to see arthurs reaction if merlin had made it seemed if he had chosen leon
cant wait to read the rest

[shadecat]

Hehe.. I couldn't have it be that mean.. Poor Arthur.

[mia_dcwut_09]

it would have been funny to read