oh, you can hear me cry {emma/graham} chapter 2

Dec 15, 2011 15:29

title: oh, you can hear me cry (ff.net link) & (tumblr)
author: moi
summary:  There’s a hole inside of her, a void she didn’t even know was there; something had been ripped out and crushed into dust.
disclaimer: I own my crappy writing and my tears.

note: so here’s chapter 2, hopefully it will do chapter one justice :) It’s going to start being a ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 3

fan_cifully December 15 2011, 19:07:41 UTC
This was lovely!
I especially liked this part: For the briefest of moments Emma wonders if this is what having a mom feels like.
Emma's and Mary's relationship just feels so natural and I think you really captured that :)
The part with Regina was also very interesting - I guess something/one interfered with her curse... I'm curious how this is going to play out!

Also, looking forward to the fluff :D

Reply


sabaceanbabe December 15 2011, 19:13:00 UTC
I enjoyed this chapter, too. Looking forward to more. :D

I even have appropriate iconage now. \o/

ETA: Oh! And this line really stood out for me: Vulnerable, she remembers, you’re being vulnerable and you’re letting everyone see you weak. Emma needs to take Snow's words to heart and let Graham someone inside the walls she's built.

Reply


brittanyls May 6 2012, 01:20:13 UTC
Please write more of this!!! I am newer to OUAT fanfic, but I love Emma and Graham together!!!!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up