That was great! I actually 'saw' the whole scene play out in my mind's eye. Right down to the Scooby Doo bandaids!! It's rare to read a fic of any kind that creates an instant mini-movie in your brain.
looking for a part time job and looking for a part-time job and
your abilities. your abilities?
"No no." The woman said. "Don't No, no," the woman said, "don't
Is That Is that
eyebrow, his large hand reaching for the pitcher of water on the table he made a gesture at The Flying Squirrel and she nodded holding out her own glass. eyebrow, his large hand reaching for the pitcher of water on the table. He made a gesture at The Flying Squirrel, and she nodded, holding out her own glass.
woman asked her voice changing woman asked, her voice changing
"No sweety "No, sweetie
"See I told See, I told
were upset, but it all good now right Monkey? were upset, but it's all good now, right Monkey?
Scooby-do band aids Scooby Doo Band-aids
asked. "Yes The asked. "Yes. The
your Secretaries Birthday? You did get her a gift right? your secretary's birthday? You did get her a gift, right?
Yay! Thank you for the edit! I have both entries edited and filed away for further use. YOu are so helpful. XDDDDD
************** Thanks. I really appricate your comments. I try to do that because normally I am not that interesting to write about. So stories are the only way I feel I can explain things.
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I just didn't get the feeling I wanted from it no matter how many times I wrote. I am sorry X(
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Bravo! Really well done.
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"What Brings you "What brings you
looking for a part time job and looking for a part-time job and
your abilities. your abilities?
"No no." The woman said. "Don't No, no," the woman said, "don't
Is That Is that
eyebrow, his large hand reaching for the pitcher of water on the table he made a gesture at The Flying Squirrel and she nodded holding out her own glass.
eyebrow, his large hand reaching for the pitcher of water on the table. He made a gesture at The Flying Squirrel, and she nodded, holding out her own glass.
woman asked her voice changing woman asked, her voice changing
"No sweety "No, sweetie
"See I told See, I told
were upset, but it all good now right Monkey? were upset, but it's all good now, right Monkey?
Scooby-do band aids Scooby Doo Band-aids
asked. "Yes The asked. "Yes. The
your Secretaries Birthday? You did get her a gift right? your secretary's birthday? You did get her a gift, right?
Yes I Yes, I
Both Superheros Both superheroes
them."I'm sorry I have ( ... )
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Thanks. I really appricate your comments. I try to do that because normally I am not that interesting to write about. So stories are the only way I feel I can explain things.
Thanks again!!!!!!
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