(suju/tvxq) the fifth floor bathroom suicide

[wild_pointer]

title the fifth floor bathroom suicide
genre general, horror, comedy
characters / pairings hyukjae, junsu, yunho, donghae
fandom (crossover) super junior, tvxq
rating pg-7
word count 2722
about a ghost haunts the bathroom in the fifth floor of the sm entertainment building. curious trainees, namely, hyukjae, junsu, yunho and donghae, stay in the

Comments

[aoimidori]

"Let's make Donghae cry today."

Best. Opening. Line. Ever. And I like how Hyuk's all WHAT AGAIN like they do it so often it's starting to get boring. Like he knows all this bullying will eventually get back to him years later - twelve-fold. And Junsu's all CAUSE WE CAN like he fuck knows it'll never get back to him the way it'll Hyuk, loololololol. ♥

Sungmin added bonus. :D

Sungmin shook his head. "Whatever. It's pretty pointless. So, what if you make Donghae cry? He cries everyday without your help."

"He does?" Junsu asked with a slight tone of glee.

Every line is fucking precious. So far, if I could, I'd quote evry thing. Junsu you little fucktard, hahaha. And emo!Hae, hahaha, precious.

Hyukjae, Junsu and Sungmin screamed, while Donghae whimpered and pressed closer to Yunho in fear.Suddenly the little idiots are retardedly scared, lolololololololol

[wild_pointer]

I'm glad you liked my opening line. I wanted the fic to revolve around Junsu torturing Donghae. Hehe. I got the idea from this. It's also the inspiration for Junsu being really evil. I mean who can think of how to make someone cry every day and not be evil?

I was actually thinking if Sungmin would get to join them in the ghost-hunting, but I couldn't think of how he'd react to an actual ghost other than screaming his head off like a Girls' Generation member. :/ I don't think Sungmin was like that before debut.

Originally, Sungmin was the one who was behind the scare, but I thought it would be predictable. Hahahaa.

Thank you for reading! And I'm glad you like it! :D ♥

I heard a voice calling me, calling me...

[aoimidori]

wasn't sungmin calmer than shindong in that adonis camp episode? with the courage test? not sure though since i mostly skipped that part out of boredom, haha.

[wild_pointer]

D: i don't remember! I must watch that again. I must have skipped that, too.

[hae]

Oh God,

Hyukjae and Junsu certainly got what they were asking for.

Poor Donghae ♥ >>

[wild_pointer]

Yeah. They're being punished for making Donghae cry.

Thank you for reading! ♥

[pureuda]

spdofnsodifsdfsdf omg i love you. for real face. ♥♥♥♥ is that hyuksu and yunhae omg *____*

[wild_pointer]

yes, that is hyuksu and yunhae, although this is really a genfic.

thank you for reading! ♥

[conflate]

Poor Donghae. XD He's so precious ♥
LOL @ Hyuk and Junsu. Serves them right~ XD

BUT IDK, I was kinda scared. ;o;

[wild_pointer]

LOL I really didn't mean to scare anyone with this. My intention was mainly to make people laugh, but I'm glad that you found it scary, too.

Thank you for reading! ♥

[sy_ya]

You had me lol-ing here. XDDD There were just a couple of sentences that seem a bit off/typo/etc, e.g. rehearsal rooms were for reserved for the sunbae, maybe this was supposed to be "were reserved for the sunbae"? It was a good read as a whole ^^ I had fun.

[wild_pointer]

Thank you for the correction! I really appreciate it when readers point out my mistakes like you did. :D

I'm glad the fic had you lol-ing. Thank you for reading! ♥