Across the Line - Prologue

Aug 09, 2013 22:45


Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain


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jaeho, across the line

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ztarplay August 10 2013, 04:48:15 UTC
“I’m going to fix you!” he crowed during his second lap around the courts. He was beaming, he was laughing, then grinning some more. His cheeks were hurting. “I’m going to fix you and you’re going to be amazing!”

I'm going to guess it's Jaejoong. *Shrug*

I don't read YJ much nowadays, but this one just kind of called to me. I'm looking forward to it. (^__^)

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wild_terrain August 13 2013, 12:33:29 UTC
Oh cool, that's great! I can only hope it continues to pique your interest. ^^

I know what you mean though, I hardly read any YJ these days. I kind of miss it!

Thanks for reading! <3

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romanticparis August 10 2013, 05:08:34 UTC
I was imagining yunho the whole time I was reading it :) reading this made me very nostalgic about my childhood! It really did kind of hurts in a way that you know you can't go back in time and relive the fun memories :/ I seriously cannot wait for more!

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wild_terrain August 13 2013, 12:35:44 UTC
All shall be revealed~

Yehh, that's exactly the kind of feeling I was trying to express. I am so sentimental, I swear! It sucks that you can never really revisit an old place and experience it in the same way you did before. How great would it be to be able to just step back into our memories for a moment and have a bit of time-out from our current reality. *sigh*

Thank you so much for reading!

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leesayori August 10 2013, 06:02:34 UTC
The HANDSTAND...... its yunho

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wild_terrain August 13 2013, 12:36:21 UTC
haha the handstand king?

All shall be revealed~

Thank you for reading. <3

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shinchul303 August 10 2013, 12:59:29 UTC
You're so right about the photo. How incredible is that?

Looking forward to the first chapter.

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wild_terrain August 13 2013, 12:37:24 UTC
Yehhhh! It blew my mind. It was totally worth capturing despite looking like a total creep to do so. XD

Thank you for reading. <3

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nijo_nozomi August 12 2013, 19:41:27 UTC
Ooh~ sounds really good so far! ^_^
Somehow, I got the impression that it is YunHo walking about during my first read~ I'll have to re-read it later to check again and look for the clues you mentioned^^

Also, the picture really fits the mental image I got while reading your description, no wonder you did a double take on that tennis court^^

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wild_terrain August 13 2013, 12:41:38 UTC
Oh goooood, thank god! ^^;;

hehe yehh later feel free to do so. There is definitely a lot there to discover, hehe. Though of course only the writer is going to know everything about a character with even just a prologue so I don't expect people to see all the clues at this very early stage of the fic. ^^ I had way too much fun with it though.

Yehhh that court blew my mind! It became the best visual reference for some of the smaller details too. What a lucky find! I should walk around random places more often. XD

Thank you so much for reading!

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