I knew it was JJ! LOL well besides that he's been fixing it up for 6 months already when Yunho comes, Yuhno is only 23... I'm really curious to see why JJ has such a problem with Yunho though, especially with the age gap. I noticed Yunho's thoughts while looking at the two courts. He compared them to an overachiever that everyone loved and the one in the shadows who gave up... could be Yunho and JJ? Interesting that the court Yunho played on was restored while the other one (his favorite because of the boy he used to watch?) was in disrepair. Looking forward to more clues in the next chapter.^^
A YJ Tennis theme fanfiction? Well this is new to me and exciting *-* And Yunho a professional Tennis player? My feelings ;A; He looked perfect in Scream ! Hmm, I wonder why Jae hates him so much? I mean dislikes him. Maybe they were lovers but Yunho chose becoming a professional player over him? Hmm. Will be waiting for the next chapter ^_-
You bet it is! It is new for me too (which I guess is why I am having so much fun with it? XD). Whoot whoot.
Ooh yesssss Jung Yunho is. I have always wanted to see Yunho play it. As a dancer (and decent sportsman in general) he would turn it into an artform. The closest I got was DBSK's funny badmington game in Saipan. ^^;;
Haha I love how you changed hate to dislike. Very true. Mmm who knows! I will have to keep leaving more pieces to the puzzle. >D
The suspense. Jaejoong really seems distraught. I wonder what his story is. From what I can deduct: he was an active kid who played in those courts often [Yunho even noticed him], but grew up to study abroad and went corporate? Mhm. He seems to really love tennis though.
I'm so CURIOUS!
I like that you included another character's POV . Does that mean we'll get to know more about the other characters too? That would be nice.
Anyway, nice job. Can't wait for your next update.
Hehe I do love me some suspense. Such fun that it is only chap one. So much fun still to be had. ^_~
Keep up the good analysing.
Yehh it won't just be YJ's POV in this fic. Other perspectives can be so fun since every person sees things differently and you can explore awesome areas. Plus I guess I am a sap and squee inside when third parties notice YJ things. *_*
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You are so good at reading clues. Mega thumbs up.
I especially love that you caught onto the court metaphors. That is definitely something to keep an eye on. That is all I can say... ^_~
Thank you for reading!! :D
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wonder why Jay detests Yun so much
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That is definitely the question!
Thank you for reading!
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Ooh yesssss Jung Yunho is. I have always wanted to see Yunho play it. As a dancer (and decent sportsman in general) he would turn it into an artform. The closest I got was DBSK's funny badmington game in Saipan. ^^;;
Haha I love how you changed hate to dislike. Very true. Mmm who knows! I will have to keep leaving more pieces to the puzzle. >D
Thank you for reading and for your comment!
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Yehhh can't wait to sink my teeth in to it all. :D
Thank you for reading!
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The suspense. Jaejoong really seems distraught. I wonder what his story is. From what I can deduct: he was an active kid who played in those courts often [Yunho even noticed him], but grew up to study abroad and went corporate? Mhm. He seems to really love tennis though.
I'm so CURIOUS!
I like that you included another character's POV . Does that mean we'll get to know more about the other characters too? That would be nice.
Anyway, nice job. Can't wait for your next update.
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Keep up the good analysing.
Yehh it won't just be YJ's POV in this fic. Other perspectives can be so fun since every person sees things differently and you can explore awesome areas. Plus I guess I am a sap and squee inside when third parties notice YJ things. *_*
Thank you for reading! <3
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