Across the Line - Chapter 3

Aug 29, 2013 00:38


Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain


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jaeho, across the line

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onewaytrackk August 28 2013, 17:18:05 UTC
I'm so excited for this story to develop even more!!!!!!!!! IT'S LIKE TENNIS + YUNJAE.

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wild_terrain September 5 2013, 02:53:06 UTC
Whoo hoo, me too! =D

Mmm, my favourite combination! Every year I've had my cravings and now they shall be fulfilled. >D

Thanks for reading!

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hyunnyb August 28 2013, 21:05:40 UTC
I'm really enjoying this story. I like that Jay is not an open book, he has a lot of stuff going on that we aren't privy to yet. Yunho is interesting, we're getting to see bits of his conflict. His potential and dedication seem to be at odds with his distracted mind. My favorite continues to be Yoochun, he's so funny, you've really made him into a comic. I'm really looking forward to the addition of Junsu to the story as well! Good luck with getting some rest, awesome job again as usual<3

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wild_terrain September 5 2013, 02:56:36 UTC
Awesome, good to know!

Ohh yes Jay sure does have a hell of a lot going on. Lots of stuff. I can't wait to properly crack his head open. ^^;;

That's a nice summary of Yunho.

Haha, Yoochun is fun, that's for sure. It's just the beginning with him... Beware. XD

Thank you for reading!

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dilovesyunjae August 29 2013, 00:42:57 UTC
Ahh so yunho's taking a break from tennis...

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wild_terrain September 5 2013, 02:57:26 UTC
Yep yep! We'll see how well he goes with that plan... =P

Thanks for reading!

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ztarplay August 29 2013, 02:18:28 UTC
Yoochun is my favorite character, next to Jae! He's hilarious.

Now, as for the YunJae... Interesting... I have feeling that boy Yunho spoke about is Jae but he doesn't recognize him as a grown up? Waiiiiiii!? Or maybe it's understandable if enough time passes by but still... mhm...curiouser and curiouser...

Can't wait for their next meeting... kekeke~ *winks* I'm kind of just expecting Jae to blow up one day and give Yunho a piece of his mind for *cough-half assing his dreams-maybe stealing his-cough* and Yunho just totally not see it coming until his bleeding on the floor. Muahahaha

Ahem. I'm not violent. I swear. *Sniff* Nnn'wayz... I'm being presumptuous, I know. But I can't help it. I'm so curious my mind is on overdrive.

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wild_terrain September 5 2013, 03:02:22 UTC
Oh that crazy Yoochun. It's just the beginning with him... And then mixed with Jay and you have a whole lot of crazy. XD

Yep, there didn't seem to be any recognition there from Yunho. Maybe Jay changed heaps in 10+ years, maybe Yunho has a crap memory, or maybe it isn't Jay. Mum's the word on that one!

Oh I think that kind of explosive argument is quite inevitable with YunJae's personalities, heheh. I love the picture you painted with that! Can Yunho be twitching on the floor as well? XDD. Or Jay is bawling and throwing darts at a picture of Yunho's face? Unless there is a mirror of that and Yunho is the one ripping Jay a new asshole. Too fun.

Thank you for reading!

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ztarplay September 5 2013, 10:18:31 UTC
Way too fun. You got something good here. ^_^

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gyorgeous August 29 2013, 11:29:58 UTC
"Pig Latin", I literally rolled on my bed laughing after reading this part. Hilarious. This is a golden language which must be taken note of. :)

Though it is factual that -whatever- lies between Yunho and Jay has something to do with their past and of course, would definitely have something to do with their future as well, I like how every info takes its own sweet time to unfold. Nothing too much, nothing too less.

By the way, I just have to say how much I love Yunho and Jay's first meeting, it's very life-like. I mean, that's how people are in real life, no? No one actually knows by first meeting that they are bound to meet the people they met, right?

Thank you for this update! ...and the waiting for the next chapter begins! :)

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wild_terrain September 5 2013, 03:12:02 UTC
Pig Latin is so hard!! I never got it as a kid and I still can't do it without ten minutes per word, I swear! It's very clever though for those with quick brains. ^^;;

Yehh there's like a very blurry picture that slowly comes into focus. It sure is taking its sweet time to make complete sense. So many layers...

I'm glad you liked that meeting. It's far too horribly realistic, isn't it? Awkward and not necessarily something that sticks in your mind -- crazy dominoes or not. It reminds me a bit of the imagery of two people passing each other on a street. You don't know them and you barely look at them but later on they are actually going to be someone really important to you. I just love it.

Thank you for reading! <3

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