Across the Line - Chapter 8 (Part 3/3)

Jan 12, 2014 14:26


Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain

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jaeho, across the line

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noeldenever January 12 2014, 04:32:32 UTC
Odg..an update, an updateeeee.. *sobbing in joy
And oh Lord, the boy really is Jae????? *screams
I really am sobbing for Jae here, what a painful & shocking day, what a mindfuck he had ;;__;;
I'm feeling hysterics just reading this..
Oh no Chun, please don't...you didn't know what your best friend was going through.
Uh..if Yunho knew Jae's real name, how come he didn't find out that Jae became a quite renowned international player after leaving The Grove?

I never watched a full tennis game all my life, don't know a thing about it other than the best players' name, but I'm grateful to that Australian Open thing for feeding your muse. Thank you very much for updating, will re-read again to mull over the meaning of Jae's tattoo <3

Oh and...eventhough you can't watch Yunho on a tennis match, at least you've watched TVXQ con in Korea last holiday (if I'm not mistaken) ^^

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ztarplay January 12 2014, 05:15:50 UTC
SPOTTO!

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ztarplay January 12 2014, 07:55:19 UTC
Woah. So now more tension builds. This time, for realz. Looks like Jay is going to have to deal with a lot of his issues now. But I'm assuming, not before some pushin' and pullin' ... *Smirks*

I love your character dynamics, girl. You have a talent for it.

Looking forward to your next update~ (^_^)V

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jaan30 January 12 2014, 06:00:13 UTC
AAH I KNEW IT!!!!! Have to sleep now though, so I'll be back later to comment.^^

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jaan30 January 13 2014, 06:12:37 UTC
Okay, Yunho in the beginning is soo observant LOL wow. But I'm glad he noticed and went to help. Poor Jay... he's still devastated and Yunho's right it's not just the leg cramps. “I wasn’t even playing hard out there… I was barely moving…” aww JJ we know... (*cuddles him*) Yunho pouting trying to get Jay to talk is adorable btw! Cute! Their whole conversation was good, yay for the Yunjae^^ that flame over his heart though, and how he wanted it to hurt... the passion he has locked away sure does hurt his heart... T.T I want him to be happy, dang it! The tattoo on his back, seems almost like he's hiding the person he is underneath, his story, under the disguise of his "new" self (changing his name and all...) Yunho seemed to really appreciate all that skin though... ^^ yep, he's definitely attracted LOL ( ... )

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crimsonarcenon January 12 2014, 06:31:32 UTC
An update yay happiness overload hmmm all great writers in lj updated at the same time hoho really overjoyed about it ( ... )

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hujanbiru January 12 2014, 08:02:46 UTC
Yay new update..where have you been?Love this chapter..

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