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Across the Line - Chapter 9

Sep 27, 2014 11:31

Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain

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jaeho, across the line

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donud September 27 2014, 02:26:40 UTC

OH MY GAWD!!!!!!!!!! am i dreaming?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally you are updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

donud September 27 2014, 02:59:04 UTC

oh hey i've done reading! first of all.. welcome back! i am so happy!

and finally some intimate between YoonJae lol

and what's with this Yunho attention with going commando to go for interview? such a naughty boy! otl

wild_terrain October 5 2014, 00:38:27 UTC

Aww~ It's been really nice to be back!

Finally eh? LOL!! Yeh it's been, what, 3 or so weeks since YJ met? That is so slow for them. XD

Yunho is either really confident, or really kinky. Or both! But he can't use the excuse: 'it was a laundry day' because he was staying with his parents! Bahaha.

Thanks for reading! <3

bjhb September 27 2014, 02:27:10 UTC

THANKS FOR THE UPDATE BEEN WAITING ON THIS STORY.

wild_terrain October 5 2014, 00:39:11 UTC

No way, that's awesome! Thanks for still being here and reading! =D

rjaejoo September 27 2014, 02:48:00 UTC

So happy to see this! I just might need to go back and reread it all over! :)

wild_terrain October 5 2014, 00:40:46 UTC

Yay!! That's awesome!

Ahh....Yeh...... I don't blame you. It has been a while, huh? *sobs*

ztarplay September 27 2014, 03:11:43 UTC

Holy effin Jaejoong! That was steamy as hell and I was already sweating from laughing so hard before. I dammed near chocked on the first kiss. (@^_^@)

Girl, your humor kills me though. I luv it.

Nice update. It is good to see you back♥☆♬

wild_terrain October 5 2014, 00:44:37 UTC

Praise be to JaeJoong! XDD

Whoo hoooo, glad you enjoyed that too. >D

It's kind of hard transitioning from a laughig mood to a sexy-time mood, but hey, YunJae are special. They have lots of feels.

Laughter is good!

Cheers! t's really good to be back. =D

Thank you for reading! <3

hyunnyb September 27 2014, 03:17:13 UTC

I'm so thrilled you updated! So much interesting stuff in this one. I was happy to get a little more of Jay's back story, what an awful father he had. The whole scene on the court chasing after tennis balls was so much fun. But the best scene was totally unexpected for me, yes three cheers for you and the all of a sudden YunJae sexy-time! I really thought that wouldn't happen until after the match with Yunho having to watch Jaejoong in a tennis skirt all day;) That scene was just perfect<3
I love this story, well all of your stories, so thank you such much for the update!

wild_terrain October 5 2014, 00:50:23 UTC

Yayyy! Thank you!

Oh yeh, this chap was content overload. It was originally only half the chapter but I was like: nope, this is a full chapter. lol

It can be weird transitioning from a laughing mood to a sexy-time mood but I guess both get your heart racing and your spirits up, especially if most of that competition is flirting. Oh YunJae. >D

Unexpected is good~ Those crazy kids weren't expecting it either. In the heat of the moment.....

HAHA I'm kind of glad they got a bit of it out of their systems before JJ has to wear a skirt... Poor boy wouldn't feel very sexy in one. XD

Thanks so much for reading! <3