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WB - Wild, Wild Winchesters (Part one)
Dec 16, 2014 19:16
Part Two
http://wildblueyonder6.livejournal.com/48176.html
john and the boys
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wise_old_crone
December 17 2014, 14:09:51 UTC
Wheee! You are back in action. Loved Part 1. Those boys do know how to find trouble.
Found one small boo-boo:
"As they stepped out of the dimly lit barn into the bright early morning sunlight"
I think it should mean 'evening' and that the sun is just about to go down :-)
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wildblueyonder6
July 15 2015, 00:17:24 UTC
Well, you commented in December and I'm responding in July...sounds about right! Sorry for the lateness...for some reason I have found a lot of old comments that LJ never gave me.
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wise_old_crone
July 16 2015, 02:20:18 UTC
Hahaha, LJ DOES seem to have a sort of humour, I grant it that. No worries... and now I just might go back and re-read this gem! Lovely surprise!
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wildblueyonder6
July 16 2015, 22:39:10 UTC
You figured out my secret! I wait months to respond to someone just to get them to re-read!
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francesca2434
July 14 2015, 20:54:52 UTC
YAY I LOVE THIS:) I can just see poor Dean's wounded ego haha.
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wildblueyonder6
July 15 2015, 00:17:56 UTC
Thanks! Dean and his wounded ego...never a dull moment with that kid!
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Found one small boo-boo:
"As they stepped out of the dimly lit barn into the bright early morning sunlight"
I think it should mean 'evening' and that the sun is just about to go down :-)
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