WBY - The Love of a Girl (part five)

[wildblueyonder6]

“MOMMA LOOK!” Mandy bounds out of the shallow part of the pond, tiny feet splashing water and pond muck up her tanned legs. Adam breathes a small sigh of relief when Elizabeth makes no comments about her mud-splattered child, as if children and mud just seem to go hand in hand. Mandy runs to Elizabeth all smiles and laughter. Adam’s heart swells

Comments

[lady_m_319]

Absolutely loving where the story went. Mandy may need to watch her tirades if gramps is around. He has seemed like a pushover but we all know gramps!

Love the honest discussion between Adam & Elizabeth about how she parents and Adam's insights into parenting and his sharing on how John parents(current tense).

Loved Jamie & River reading the situation and bailing.

Loved when Adam used the very Winchester request "Need to hear it, kiddo."

As I was reading I was thinking Dean might have an opinion after Liz trashed his parenting skills. And John has a tendency to mysteriously show up at the most interestingly times. Can't wait to see what's next!

[wildblueyonder6]

Sorry for the late response....things have been crazy here. I keep trying to write more but I'm failing. I'm glad you enjoyed this. It's different - not my usual style but I liked writing it and if the creek don't rise (and oddly enough it did) then I will get my ass in gear and write some more.