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Pain vs Nothing At All - Part 7

May 10, 2007 18:07

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Actually its not dull anonymous May 12 2007, 01:19:49 UTC

A story needs to have a set up, this chapter is giving the reader the inner most thoughts of the characters. So I do think that while its not full of say all the action of an action movie, it is filled with an important amount of action into the inner workings of the characters minds.