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Pain vs Nothing At All - Part 8

May 11, 2007 19:40

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neverland, fanfiction, jolly roger, wendy darling, fanfic, wendy, hook, captain hook, peter pan, pirate

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some sizzle anonymous May 12 2007, 01:14:54 UTC

this chapter had some more sizzle to it, you could almost feel the burn coming. Keep going the story is flowing very well. :)

The fiction... anonymous August 4 2007, 00:07:12 UTC

I found this to be quite good. Aside from the typos, the content rather compelling. You have a way with suspense and urgency. You captured Hook's deadly grace and charisma beautifully. I couldn't tell if you were going off of J.M. Barrie or the live action movie...which, I thought, made it even more interesting. I am eager to read more...bravo!

Re: The fiction... wildbubblesroam August 9 2007, 20:42:44 UTC

Thanks! :) Your comment was really nice. I appreciate it :)