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[wildcolumbine]

WRINGING IT OUT

A BBM canon one-shot set in 1964.
The characters and original story
shamelessly ripped off here are
the creations of Annie Proulx,
to whom I am eternally grateful."Ennis? .... Ennis? What's takin so long

Comments

[gwylliondream]

Oooh, that gave me a shiver. Just gorgeous writing.

Thanks for posting,
Donna

[camillar]

Wow, this was just gorgeous. Bittersweet and haunting. I loved it!
Camilla

[anony_mouse19]

oh wow this was really wonderful.i missed your writing, hope you update more frequently.
i loved how you showed Ennis in a place he's familiar with,where he knows what to do but how he does not belong there.he longs to be in that place where he's not in control and does not have to be.with the person he loves the most.

thank you.

[jenna_hilary]

I am very struck by anony-mouse19's comment: "He longs to be in that place
where he's not in control and does not have to be."

That is just.... Tremendous food for thought! Wow.
Love,
Jenna

[sliveredmoon]

This was beautiful. You do so much more than paint a picture...you transported me right into their constricted little lives.

[passionscowboys]

Wow - this was really powerful and beautiful in a gritty way. You're a very talented writer!