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[wildcolumbine]

UP A LAZY RIVER

This is just a bit of nonsense, more a writing exercise than anything. Enjoy.

***Sinuous and dreamy, like a languid river flowing from the tributaries of his arms to the wide delta of his legs, Ennis stretched across the bed. Jack decided to swim upstream, sampling the littoral delights on the way. On the left-hand shore some toes

Comments

[annabuffy]

Very different, but very sexy and very good.

[gwylliondream]

Hah! That was great! Loved the little piggies part! Made me look up a new word too - littoral!

XO
Donna

[acht_acht]

This was just SMASHING good ... how I would like to take a swim in Ennis´ waters.

The river rose up and swallowed him whole; the afternoon passed into gentle evening; they slept.
The magic of that last sentence send me into complete loose-limbed relaxation. Beautiful.

Cheers, Clara

[edgarsbabe]

This was TERRIFIC!

"But the last little piggy went -- Ow! Fuck! That hurt!" LMAO!!

[fl1789]

Nice! :))))

fl.