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wildcolumbine

KISS, Chapter 3

Jan 07, 2011 09:03

Sorry for the delay - blame it on the festive season! And technical incompetence has caught up with me again today, and I can't get the lj-cut to work.

As ever, my deepest respect and thanks to Annie Proulx.

( KISS, CHAPTER 3 )

wildcolumbine, genre: au, kiss

Comments 41

Wow at the old ripe age of 63 zhouhua00 January 8 2011, 02:59:50 UTC

First, Ennis went to look for Jack in that County Fair in 1965 but didn't find him? So he literally lived his whole life alone and lonely, never married and had a family?

It surprised and amused me to see Jack still needs his itches scratched at the ripe old age of 63...LOL! Perhaps Ennis stirred something in his heart, and his body as well?

I am an avid reader and i spent most of time reading. But I truly don't remember when is the last I read romance between two old people in their 60s. I can't wait to see more!

Hua

Re: Wow at the old ripe age of 63 wildcolumbine January 13 2011, 09:49:50 UTC

63 isn't so old :) We'll find out later about how Ellis filled his time without Jesse.

Re: Wow at the old ripe age of 63 zhouhua00 January 13 2011, 16:19:47 UTC

I thought it is old until I read Camillar's new story yesterday - Grow Old With Me, and our boys are 66 and never meet before! Hahaha!

So when it rains it pours, isn't it? No old romance for so long and now two in a week!

Re: Wow at the old ripe age of 63 wayne1932 February 9 2011, 15:47:21 UTC

Basic instincts never die. I'm 78, and I know what I'm talking about. Why am I reading about these relationships? Married 48 years to a wonderful woman, but still wonder what if? Of course the body fails the capacity for anything physical, but I still enjoy the company of men.

tizi17 January 8 2011, 10:13:01 UTC

i truly love your wonderful style in this story, and i am looking forward to find out more about the years before for ellis - and why should anybody "worry" him being with kids? did i get something wrong here?
thank you so much for a great update!

wildcolumbine January 13 2011, 09:48:54 UTC

Thank you so much for your lovely comments, Tizi.

ramona4jake January 8 2011, 21:45:23 UTC

I'm wondering what happened to Ellis that made him so... mean ? Spiting on that young man...

luvenck January 9 2011, 01:08:25 UTC

HI Ramona!!! Yeah, There are a LOT of questions for this story, isn't there? I keep running scenarios over in my head, but don't know anything for sure!

Nice talking to you for a change!

Hugs
Cat

wildcolumbine January 13 2011, 09:47:42 UTC

I'm sure we'll find out in due course. It's fun to write about someone who isn't quite Ennis.

geordie3 January 10 2011, 06:53:35 UTC

I am just thrilled that you are writing another Brokeback story. This is an absolutely intriguing premise, and your writing is incredible as always. Can't wait for more!

wildcolumbine January 13 2011, 09:45:53 UTC

To tell the truth, it intrigues me as well, and I'm wondering what will happen between here and the final chapter.

lara_pinta January 11 2011, 09:33:21 UTC

You write so well - the back-story of Ellis' describing his homosexual earnings with his deep rooted homophobic actions compared to Jesse's more ready acceptance of his sexuality was most revealing.

The incident with the children showing that Ellis may still have some softness under that hardened exterior is like a quiet promise of what we may find about Ellis as the story progresses.

It seemed so fitting that Ellis would be as his most attractive doing what he does best and that is handling animals.

Terrific chapter.

Thank you
Lorna

wildcolumbine January 13 2011, 09:44:29 UTC

Lorna, thank you so much for your support. It's a pleasure to write for everyone.