I'm one of them who ever so often rereads your story- and I still love it, esp. the last paragraph grips my heart every time- it's like poetry (not exactly the right expression but I can't think of a better word) and hey- coincidence- right now I'm reading 'A Sweeter Life' :) Paula
Oh my, I have absolutely no regrets for getting into this fandom, 13 years be damned. This work was absolutely breathtaking, start to finish. Your characterization of Jack and Ennis was fantastic, with every moment of joy and heartbreak still lingering in my bones just a bit. You have a way with words, and the way you wrote paragraphs to paint a beautiful picture in my head or describe the emotion left me captivated. The cadence was perfect, and I can't help but applaud the way you used the characters without deviating so far from their depiction in the book. I definitely have plans to reread this again, hopefully during a less stressful time like midterms (still worth it.) Please do not stop writing, what you have is a gift. Thank you for making my week :)
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esp. the last paragraph grips my heart every time- it's like poetry (not exactly the right expression but I can't think of a better word)
and hey- coincidence- right now I'm reading 'A Sweeter Life' :)
Paula
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